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New Magic - A Tale of a Blue Wizard (NC-17)
by Ingole.

Chapters [20]
Reviews [29]
Sun Aug 07, 2005 9:58 pm

Oh, wow! I love everyone's reaction to the baby. Please don't tell me you're ending the story here! it's OK< though, if you wrap up a few of the last little ends in pod's story. I hope this one has one more chapter or so coming, anyway. Great job! I love these stories of yours. Bow smiley face
 
 
Lavender's Lessons (R)
by MaryA.

Chapters [3]
Reviews [10]
Warnings [Mildly adult sexual situations with some nudity, m]
Mon Aug 01, 2005 12:03 pm

Great story! Love the characters! Lavendar is a delightfully real character. Looking forward to the next chapter! Please post soon!
 
 
Nan Elmoth Diaries (NC-17)
by Aearwen.

Chapters [12]
Reviews [6]
Warnings [graphic sex, defloweration]
Wed Jul 27, 2005 8:38 am

I'm captivated! This is going on my watched list.
 
 
How the Eorlings Ride (PG-13)
by NeumeIndil.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [6]
Warnings [Implied sex.]
Mon Jul 25, 2005 5:47 pm

Great story! Loved seeing the men outdone by the poor little halfling! Laughing smiley face
 
 
New Magic - A Tale of a Blue Wizard (NC-17)
by Ingole.

Chapters [20]
Reviews [29]
Mon Jul 25, 2005 5:39 pm

Oooooooooooooooh, love the new chapter sooooooooo much! She's pregnant?!?!?!!? I guess that's a sign that their union is favored by the Valar. Please update soon? Bow smiley face I'm really really really looking forward to finding out more. This story is absolutely captivating!
 
 
Death's New Toy (PG-13)
by karushna5.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [2]
Warnings [None]
Thu Jul 21, 2005 10:05 am

Very interesting. A good idea for a story. I noticed a lot of spelling errors (such as "a lick fog," "wondered" where it should be "wandered," that kind of thing), and it all flowed more quickly than I usually prefer, but other than that, you have a good concept, a believable sequence of events and a nice tone to it all. Overall, good story.
 
 
Tel' Lindar (The Bard) (NC-17)
by ZeeDrippyVessel.

Chapters [41]
Reviews [99]
Warnings [if it should warned against, then it's here.]
Wed Jul 20, 2005 9:03 pm

Ooooooooooooooh, so glad to see a new chapter! Bronwyn and Snape delight as always. And it was such a great surprise for her to see her children for the holiday! This chapter was absolutely delightful! I'm looking forward to the next chapter with great anticipation!
 
 
The Calling (G)
by LuthienTinuviel.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Tue Jul 19, 2005 2:34 pm

I did enjoy this poem. I agree with the other reviewers that it conjures the Dead Marshes perfectly, from an underwater view rather than an above ground view. I disagree on the Elf vs. Orc part. I think it could very well have been an Elven warrior, looking for a little comfort and company. When you are totally alone, without hope, without being able to see anyone else, but still knowing that someone must be there somewhere, and then suddenly have a bright life-force, encompassed in a warm being, desperation could easily cause a trapped soul to grasp at the chance to know something of the life it lost once more. There was a sense of desperation and an overall tone of loneliness that leads one to believe that the speaker would do anything to ease the torment of it, even if only for a moment. There was a wonderful tone to the whole poem. Great job!
 
 
My little hope (G)
by Sarah1313.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [2]
Warnings [None]
Tue Jul 19, 2005 8:05 am

I like the way you're writing this and the description of a part of Gilraen's juorney to Imladris. I'm looking forward to more of her journey.
 
 
Purity (PG-13)
by Fallon307.

Chapters [2]
Reviews [9]
Warnings [Some violence; mild sexuality]
Tue Jul 19, 2005 8:00 am

Enjoying it so far! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!