Reviews by Shanalir

Lembas Again · Tue Jul 19, 2005 7:38 am

Poor guy! Great way of describing it!

What's on his mind · Tue Jul 19, 2005 7:33 am

So that's what Sauron saw in Pip's mind! I'd wondered, as no harm seemed to come of his looking into the forbidden globe. Laughing smiley face

Triumph Incarnate · Tue Jul 19, 2005 7:27 am

You wov e a really great picture here. I've never read the Silm, so I'm not necessarily familiar with the scene you drew upon, but still the picture of evil sittin upon it's dark throne laughing at the follies and petty evils of man, rejoicing as it has turned so many to it's cause, is a very thought provoking glimpse into Sauron's rule. Great drabble!

Earth and Sky · Tue Jul 19, 2005 7:19 am

A great thoughtful piece. I really enjoyed the deeper deving, and the hint that this was when prejudice was first overshadowed by truth. Very nicely done.

The White Lady of Rohan · Mon Jul 18, 2005 2:58 pm

I am very confused. This looks like a great start to a story, but it would be really helpful to know a little bit more about what is going on. (Why Faramir and Eowyn are out in the middle of nowhere, where exactly they are and why Gandalf would lend Shadowfax to them, or for that matter, why Shadowfax would let himself be lent, a little more info on what this unnamed evil might be, where exactly Aragorn, Legolas and Gimli are, etc.) There is a lot of dialogue and a lot of action, but not much description otherwise. The story could use some fleshing out, and probably a good beta (check the forums), as well as a little slowing down. It seems to run very quickly. On the other hand, it's very interesting, and I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Not Wholly Unwilling · Mon Jul 18, 2005 12:47 pm

I really like the way you wrote this. It really does show two sides to the story. I haven't read the Silm, so I'm not sure who exactly the characters are, but this is a really great piece to read, nonetheless. Very thought provoking. I'd like to read more of your take on their relationship, if you intend to continue this.

Call To Arms · Mon Jul 18, 2005 11:11 am

This is hilarious! i could just see the picture! LMAO funny! I do love what you do to those Nazgul! Sometimes it almost makes me feel sorry for them........and then I go off in search of your Fell beast fics! This gets funnier the more I read it!

The Ring of Support · Mon Jul 18, 2005 9:35 am

This is absolutely inspired! LMAO, I love it!

Galadriel's Shots · Mon Jul 18, 2005 9:28 am

LMAO, this is absolutely hilarious the first time, and gets better with each re-reading! I love it! ROFL smiley face

Last Dance · Mon Jul 18, 2005 8:34 am

Great drabble! I really like the idea. not something that would have ocurred to me! Really a wonderful job!

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