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StoryReview
Born Again (PG-13)
by Fyalee.
Chapters [3]
Reviews [12]
Warnings [Adult themes, angst]
Fri Jul 22, 2005 7:01 pm
Absolutely grand! I have had an extremely hard time in finding haldir stories that are well written with an actual plot. I have to say that this story blew me out of the water.....and it just the beginning! Please,continue the story, I admit that I have a slight fetish for OC dropped in ME, but only good ones. I just have to say that this story is definately turning out to be a MSue. Marysue's are written as perfect,witty,buetiful and they all seem to have this attitude that screams ' I am perfect and can get away with anything including insulting the OR characters and everyone still loves me!' bleeehhhh!
The way you are describing your MC and her reactions is far from that. I hope this storie goes through all the rollercoster emotions that happen in real life....angst,humor,sorrow,tragedy,love(emotional & physical),happiness,laughter & tears. Yes I understand that elves are supposed to be stoic,but they also have emotions. If not,how would they fade from grief?
I love your story,anxious to read it to the end,definately am going to save it to my harddrive...lol. hopefully I'll be reading the next chapter soon. Great job!!!