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The Unbearable Smugness of Being (Feanor) (G)
by IgnobleBard.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 6] Warnings [None]
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Sun Apr 27, 2008 11:37 am
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Whenever I read this story I laugh like a mad woman  Thank you so very much for posting it here!  |
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Agony (G)
by Lotiel.
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Wed Apr 16, 2008 3:10 pm
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Congratulations on your first posting! 
This is a very evocative, poetic take on Nerdanel's feelings, and nicely done too. I can almost hear her whisper the words you've given her. And you conveyed her sadness and loss, longing and despair in a limited number of words, which is always quite a task to accomplish. Thank you very much for sharing. |
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Paradox of the Fourth Age (NC-17)
by Alassante.
Chapters [29]
Reviews [ 118] Warnings [character death, graphic battle scenes, sex]
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Thu Apr 10, 2008 12:07 pm
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Aah, I'm glad that the flashback, overall sweet and amusing (though I don't think Glorfindel would find it amusing, really ), balanced the sadness and tragedy in the 'present' part so well. This is one of the many reasons why I love your story to bits -- you are doing an awesome job with bringing a wide range of emotions. The mood of this chapter, begun with a happy time for Elrohir and Laureanna, swayed to the opposite with Halbarad's death, to return to a somewhat lighter tone.
Wonderfully done, as always Thank you for updating. I'll be waiting for another installment
All the best,
Binka |
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Gently Held (PG-13)
by Viv.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 10]
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Wed Apr 09, 2008 2:29 pm
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| Very beautiful, touching and lovely. I had a feeling as if Arwen and I were sitting on a bench in the garden on a sunny day and she would tell me this, just like that and yet in private. Thank you for creating such a feeling |
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Tucked Away (G)
by NeumeIndil.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [Fluff]
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Tue Apr 08, 2008 2:08 am
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| Very nicely done |
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The Rescue of Celebrian (PG-13)
by NeumeIndil.
Chapters [15]
Reviews [ 26] Warnings [Angst and scary images/flashbacks.]
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Thu Mar 27, 2008 9:05 am
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| Goodness! Are you trying to kill me?! Very good chapter. I loved that bit about the horses teaming up in battle. Looking forward to the next part. |
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The Rescue of Celebrian (PG-13)
by NeumeIndil.
Chapters [15]
Reviews [ 26] Warnings [Angst and scary images/flashbacks.]
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Thu Mar 20, 2008 12:48 pm
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Oh good grief! Now I'm on the very edge of my seat. I hope you're going to update pretty soon
This was a very good chapter. I love the imagery and the tension in the surroundings when the twins found out the goblins waited for them. Celebrian's hazy memories made a really heart-wrenching bit. The detailed descriptions simply transported me to the story at the very beginning of the chapter.
Very well done! I look forward to reading more. Thanks for updating. |
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Paradox of the Fourth Age (NC-17)
by Alassante.
Chapters [29]
Reviews [ 118] Warnings [character death, graphic battle scenes, sex]
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Sat Mar 08, 2008 11:33 am
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Oh! What an amazing chapter this is I think Laureanna will be furious when she gets to know what happened with her. But first things first.
The flashback; I loooove it. Every time I read about how Glorfindel would react to seeing Elrohir and his daughter I smile. They are so in love yet they've danced around each other for ages, it seems. I suppose our good old Glo would be grumpy for a while but all in all he'd approve of their relationship. He's got no other choice But hey, it already happened!
Now, I can clearly see why Laureanna so desperately wanted Elrohir to stay with her. You've done a great job conveying the feelings of uncertainty, helplesness and fear of what was to come. It's good that she has friends by her side, Legolas and Elladan, but I can't imagine what she must have felt, poor thing.
Huge thanks for updating! I'm looking forward to reading the next chap |
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Passionate Anticipation (PG-13)
by Alassante.
Chapters [3]
Reviews [ 6] Warnings [implied smut]
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Wed Mar 05, 2008 11:58 am
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| Sweet, cute and funny, and very nicely done, Al Thanks for sharing. |
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Hands (PG)
by NeumeIndil.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 5] Warnings [some lustful thoughts]
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Thu Feb 21, 2008 6:13 am
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What a nice surprise! Another story
Very thoughtful insight into Grima's obssessed mind. He reminds me of Lady Macbeth somehow, rinsing and scrubbing all tracks of his deeds from his hands. Chilling, indeed! Well, you've conveyed his thoughts very well here: a glimpse at his childhood, his desires aside the White Lady and his toxic love for her. Grima is equally methodical in washing his hands and in planning a disaster, like a psycho killer, sort of. Yet, in his blindness and obssession he didn't seem to understand that Eowyn would have rather died at her own hand than let herself stand beside Grima and Co. at the hour of Rohan's downfall he was planning.
Great job! Thanks a lot for sharing. |
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