Reviews by darkmalignity

"Arwen's Gift" and "The Reaction" · Thu Jun 23, 2005 4:09 am

awww... that was sweet. i loved how he didnt get angry.

My Eyes! My Eyes! · Thu Jun 23, 2005 3:57 am

lol! that is SO FUNNY!! its just her luck though, to have been spying on *glorfindel* of all elves... everyone knoes he's hung like a stallion. *snigger*. aragorn must be reeeeally safe then if she married him. *grinZZZ*

Elwen · Thu Jun 23, 2005 3:48 am

*squees and breaks out the Rabid Fangirl act*
man, that was so funny! who knew evles were into RP as well?! *grinz*
the first time round i had no idea what was going on. and then i read the reviews and skimmed thru a bit, and then i got it. (yeah, i'm slow. shoot me) but when i read it the third time i got all her funny little jokes... man, i love her. esp the joke about inheriting the forsight from her mom and the joke about the peaches. so cute! its so tempting to use that in my own rp... hehe...can u imagine haldir breezing in and going "hi peaches" in front of everyone?! elrond will die of embaressment! and what a coincidence. this is the third fic i've read today about a cross-dressing elrond. hmmm...
another thing which was brilliantly done. i dont know if it's on purpose, but i felt you brought out the gender bias in this kinda stuff. its so easy to dislike a male narrator, but it all changes so quickly when we realise its a she.

Finding Celebrian · Thu May 05, 2005 4:07 pm

oh wow, this is completely amazing. i love the way you write, it's so psychologically complex. i love celebrian's train of thought, you have an awesome writing style, and such deep insights into her psychology. and how her thoughts give such a clear picture of everything going on around her.

Reflections · Thu May 05, 2005 3:52 pm

"The Ring cannot put into a heart what is not already there, for the
powers of darkness have no power to create. It only brings to the
surface that which we hide even from ourselves."

oh, i love this. it's awesome.. its like a kick to the gut. poor
elrond. i love how the reflection keeps haunting him, until even the
haunting becomes familliar and he confronts and calls to the
reflection to come out. i love the way you play out his thoughts, they
are so real, and so powerful. man, its such a brilliant fic.

"Lust is desire bereft of love. How can the desire of a father be
lust?" aw man, this is awesome. it hits right at the heart of the
matter. that's the worst thing about incestuous thoughts. its having
to reconcile pure divine love with lust.. poor poor elrond. the voice
of the reflection is so psychologically deep. it lulls us in
perfectly, and the thought progression really is awesome.

i love the bit where he combs his daughter's hair. i guess its a
personal thing, but i cannot think of a more intimate and loving act
than combing someone's hair, or having my hair combed by a loved one.
its so perfect in it's intimacy... and yet for elrond it's also so
sensuous. his shock at the reflection leaves me breathless. poor
darling.

btw, did i mention that the thought of elrond whimpering breaks my
heart? man, i am a sucker for punishment! lol! this is awesome. the dual
ending was awesome. wow.

~dark

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