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Little White Lies (NC-17)
by Aeode.

Chapters [10]
Reviews [13]
Warnings [Rape//Violence//Consentual Sex]
Thu May 31, 2007 12:54 am

This is very good. I will be watching for furthur updates. I hope they both can find some happy middle ground for the both of them. It is like they find each other only to lose each other. I hope not.
 
 
Lost Out Of Time II, : The Coming Together (NC-17)
by brindlemom2.

Chapters [47]
Reviews [78]
Warnings [Alternate Universe Het]
Sun May 27, 2007 11:41 pm

Boy (or should I say girl) Both of your stories are soooo good! Golden lion and this one. Iorlas is really showing his worth in his skill as an archer. But I can't wait for the reunion of Elrond and his daughter and wondering is there a connection between Iorlas and Eleiann? Stay tuned everyone!
 
 
The Golden Lion (NC-17)
by brindlemom2.

Chapters [14]
Reviews [29]
Warnings [AU:]
Sun May 27, 2007 11:08 pm

That was a very heated and wild lovemaking. I felt it all the way over here. Now I'll have to go and take another shower!(geez!)
But then I also felt, when he finds out about her secret watch out! And what about everyone else that she had been mind playing with. I will wait again patiently,for the next chapter.
 
 
Lost Out Of Time II, : The Coming Together (NC-17)
by brindlemom2.

Chapters [47]
Reviews [78]
Warnings [Alternate Universe Het]
Mon May 21, 2007 4:33 pm

Finaly she gets to meet her brothers. And they don't even know that they just met their sister. I just hope Lord elrond is still around to finaly meet his daughter. It is what she is hoping for.
I love both your stories. This one and the 'Golden Lion' Keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming.
 
 
The Golden Lion (NC-17)
by brindlemom2.

Chapters [14]
Reviews [29]
Warnings [AU:]
Sun May 20, 2007 11:13 pm

Okay I am speechless!...................I think I will sit here and stare at the computer untill the next post! (psst...great story)
 
 
The Golden Lion (NC-17)
by brindlemom2.

Chapters [14]
Reviews [29]
Warnings [AU:]
Thu May 17, 2007 10:23 pm

Oh-oh! The young watcher better 'Watch Out!' NO pun intended.
Great story and as always I will be 'WATCHING' for the next chapter(Oh I am so bad heehee) Thank you for such a great story!
 
 
Ballistics and Bowstrings (PG)
by orist.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [12]
Warnings [constructive criticism/sarcasm(?)]
Mon May 14, 2007 11:17 pm

Very interesting point. I have never thought that way. Your right arrows are not 'Fired' nor are they cocked but drawn. Thanks for the correction. Maria
 
 
The Golden Lion (NC-17)
by brindlemom2.

Chapters [14]
Reviews [29]
Warnings [AU:]
Mon May 14, 2007 1:46 am

"UH OH!" That young Ellith better be carefull before she is found out. I think she should talk to Lord Elrond after Glorfindel leaves. That way she could discreetly tell him what's on her 'Mind.' And he could help her deal with it. I wonder what Glorfindel will do when he finds out she can read minds and mindspeak to others. The Valar help her if he did and reacts in way she didn't expect. Great job. Keep updating!
 
 
Lost Out Of Time II, : The Coming Together (NC-17)
by brindlemom2.

Chapters [47]
Reviews [78]
Warnings [Alternate Universe Het]
Mon May 14, 2007 1:32 am

OMG! That was too short. God your stories are fantastic! Oh no got to wait for another post! Uggghhh!
Anyways most of the story had me thinking about autumn and Winter. I love them both. I could fell the discriptions you gave. The smell of the forest. The air! And listening of the animals and birds singing. I could smell the cinnamin too like in the Fall and winter. And apples intermingeling with the cinnamin. It just left me breathless with those season 'scents'.
But know she has met her brothers. Though they don't know she is their sister yet! Keep it coming.
 
 
The Price of Immortality (NC-17)
by Siladan.

Chapters [16]
Reviews [29]
Warnings [sexual situations]
Wed May 09, 2007 4:56 pm

Okay Siladan! Come on keep it going. Please with a few sprinkled reviewers on top! I know how you feel. I have had only one so far. But you know what that doesn't matter. Every so often I would go on the site to see if anyone read it. I would see the number of hits and then I think well someone must be looking at it look at all the hits! That is good enough for me. People just have a tendency to not want to leave a review. Why I don't know? I am guilty of doing that every so often. Sometimes if its the first time seeing the story and there are quite a few chapters, I won't stop till I am done then I review. Your story is like that. You see something you like and it looks good ya just keep going to you've licked the whole thing dry! Oh wait Im thinking food now. But anyways don't worry about them you still have some faithful readers who want to read your story. I'll be watching.