Reviews by NeumeIndil

Spring Kiss · Tue Sep 27, 2005 10:34 pm

Excellent smuttiness and a great twist at the ending. I'm growing to enjoy Hobbit fics more and more. As for this one, I love it. Smile smiley face

Rider of the Mark · Mon Sep 26, 2005 2:58 am

LMAO at dialogue in this chapter, specifically:

"I've fallen in love with my mother... EEEWWWW!"

and

"First babies come at any time; after that it takes 9 months." My grandfather said that years and years ago and my father repeats it now. And you're right, the male mind is a scary place. Maybe that's why we love them so much. Can't wait for more, as always, but I'll have to.

BB,
Neu

Maybe We Should Stay In Minas Tirith · Sat Aug 27, 2005 3:52 pm

LMAO! I could so see that happening in the movie as an outtake or blooper. This was great. I've always been curious as to what the hobbits perceptions of the big folk women are. This kind of falls in line with my conclusions.

Bill's Evil Plan to Take over the World · Sat Aug 27, 2005 2:40 pm

Ya know, my uncle insists that all ponies think like that. This further supports my belief that they should not have named the pony after the man that turned all their first mounts loose in the first place, but that's just mho. Too funny. I absolutely loved it.

Adventures in Baking · Sat Aug 27, 2005 2:16 pm

I love it. Pies are tricky and most newly married men have to choke down a few nasty experiments in the kitchen from what I'm told. As someone said before, this doesn't strike me as pure fluff. Yes, it's not angsty or full of hanky-panky, but neither is life. There are moments like this one in everyone's memory banks and it is refreshing to read one starring two of my favorite characters. Thank you for this piece... though I'll skip the pie. Smile smiley face

The Power in That Tiny Hand · Thu Aug 18, 2005 1:42 am

Awwww! I had never even thought of elves w/ babies around. Truth be told I'd never really thought much about elves at all. What a wonderful short story.

Rider of the Mark · Sun Aug 14, 2005 1:25 am

Bloody hell. Ch. 24 left me breathless. It may still confuse some, but the italicised lines of what's going on in Gamling's head draw me in like a lasso. I just seem to fly through chapters and then sit here staring at my monitor wondering where the heck I've just been. Thank you again for an enthralling- and draining- reading experience.

Blessings,

Neume

The Influence of Kindred Desires · Tue Aug 09, 2005 5:39 pm

I loved it. I don't know why more people haven't reviewed you, but this was wonderful, especially the attention paid to the wedding rituals. Mechanics and grammar were better than most as well. Well done and thank you for such a great piece of fan fiction.

Frodo's Dreme · Sun Jul 24, 2005 11:47 pm

Very nice. Good smut, but better still a good story. I'm with Viv, we'd like to visit Frodo-world again sometime in the not too distant future. I was also impressed with how well the future tense seemed to work. Normally that is not the case but here it didn't seem to distract the reader since we began inside Frodo's head and don't leave it until the end. Kudos for trying something new. Smile smiley face

Storms over Rohan · Sun Jul 24, 2005 11:17 pm

Great drabble. I could smell the rain and feel the wind. And, well, it's about Rohan, which endears it to me even further. Smile smiley face

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