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The Journey Home (R)
by Ilmatar.
Chapters [18]
Reviews [16]
Warnings [Legomance]
Mon Jul 18, 2005 7:34 pm
wow!! this is simply a masterpiece! your imagry is certainly some of the best i have encountered! Smile smiley face i'm anxious for the rest of the story! i was wondering, are you going to keep it rater 'r'? or is there going to be more passion envovled? Twisted Evil smiley face i'm sure it would be interesting how you would go about that!


keep up the great work!!
 
 
Ullume, Ten Meles (Forever, For Love) (NC-17)
by TariImp.
Chapters [8]
Reviews [6]
Fri Jul 15, 2005 5:43 pm
Wonderful story. The plot is well thought out and captivating. i only have one sugestion. (it is not about your writing techniques, however, for you are very talented) there were words in the story spoken in elvish, that did not become traslated later in the story. it is just my suggestion that you add translations for those readers like myself who cant really figure out what they mean. but other than that, keep up the excelent work! Smile smiley face Very Happy smiley face