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Tainted Light (PG-13)
by Eldalie.

Chapters [23]
Reviews [36]
Wed Jul 07, 2010 1:42 am

Oh dear, and we come to the first kinslaying at last. You describe it brilliantly, captivating, with just a touch of the horror that the Elves surely felt. This is the time of their Doom. Lovely! Can't wait for more Smile smiley face
 
Author's replied on Wed Jul 07, 2010 5:44 am
Thank you! I was very worried about how it would come out; I am glad you liked it so well. Smile smiley face
 
The Sell-sword and the Prince. (PG-13)
by LadyBluejay.

Chapters [16]
Reviews [31]
Tue Jul 06, 2010 4:40 am

Another wonderful chapter - I really enjoyed Imrahil's dealings with Oriel's brother. The poor man didn't stand a chance! Also, the present-day situation and dialogue were heart-warming as well, despite the fact both Imrahil and Sergion lose their wives prematurely. Good job, as always, looking forward to more Smile smiley face
 
Author's replied on Thu Jul 08, 2010 2:57 pm
Thanks a lot. I enjoyed writing that chapter. LBJ
 
Tainted Light (PG-13)
by Eldalie.

Chapters [23]
Reviews [36]
Sun Jul 04, 2010 1:49 am

It took me a while to get back here and read the two chapters you put up, but wow! Was it worth the wait. Amazing, it's all I can say; the description of the darkness, the madness, the Oath. Brilliant. Can't wait for more.
 
Author's replied on Sun Jul 04, 2010 6:15 am
Thank you! I am very glad they didn't disappoint you. Smile smiley face
 
Tainted Light (PG-13)
by Eldalie.

Chapters [23]
Reviews [36]
Mon Jun 28, 2010 6:02 am

I'm happy for Silme and Maitimo for now, at least they have some happiness in them Smile smiley face great chapter, as always, looking forward to more!
 
Author's replied on Mon Jun 28, 2010 7:19 am
Thank you! Very glad you like it. Yes, they did deserve some happiness, poor them. Razz smiley face I'll update ASAP!
 
The Sell-sword and the Prince. (PG-13)
by LadyBluejay.

Chapters [16]
Reviews [31]
Mon Jun 21, 2010 2:35 pm

Things are looking up! I really enjoyed the grandmother figure, I think it added a nice touch to the story Smile smiley face Can't wait to read more.
 
Author's replied on Mon Jun 21, 2010 2:39 pm
I did enjoy writing her in - especially when I could make her a bit Rohirric. LBJ
 
Tainted Light (PG-13)
by Eldalie.

Chapters [23]
Reviews [36]
Fri Jun 18, 2010 1:18 am

There was darkness, but instead of fighting the writing opressive, I enjoyed it. You really capture the essence of Feanor's story, even if he's just a shadow hovering over Maitimo and Silme. Great job! And congrats on the nomination, you certainly deserve it Smile smiley face
 
Author's replied on Fri Jun 18, 2010 5:51 am
Thank you! Glad you liked it. Smile smiley face And thanks for the compliments. Smile smiley face
 
Tainted Light (PG-13)
by Eldalie.

Chapters [23]
Reviews [36]
Wed Jun 16, 2010 1:18 pm

Oh dear. We knew this would happen - but how will our protagonist choose? Poor Silme and Maitimo! This was a great chapter, it captured all the emotions clearly. I can't wait to read more Smile smiley face
 
Author's replied on Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:07 pm
Thank you! I am very glad you liked it. Painful choice indeed; and painful for me to write too...:p
 
The Sell-sword and the Prince. (PG-13)
by LadyBluejay.

Chapters [16]
Reviews [31]
Tue Jun 08, 2010 12:32 pm

Oh dear. Drink and pushing your luck don't work at all. *shakes head at Imrahil*
 
Author's replied on Sat Jun 12, 2010 3:01 pm
Yep, a bit too eager! LBJ
 
Tainted Light (PG-13)
by Eldalie.

Chapters [23]
Reviews [36]
Mon Jun 07, 2010 4:05 pm

And darkness gathers over Valinor, and Tirion upon fair Tuna. *sigh* But, enough of that! I really enjoyed this chapter, as those previously, you capture the characters, and the Elven grace, with such skill that I feel like a little child when I look at my own stories. I did see some typing mistakes here and there, but nothing major Smile smiley face
 
Author's replied on Mon Jun 07, 2010 5:07 pm
Yes, unfortunately my internet threatened to fail me before I posted and so I could not spell-check as thoroughly as I would have liked. Razz smiley face Well, glad it eas nothing important. Smile smiley face Glad you keep liking it! I'll update asap. We're getting to the interesting bits. Wink smiley face
 
Sleeping Beauty (R)
by SilentNiobe.

Chapters [25]
Reviews [92]
Warnings [Sexual Content, Language]
Thu Jun 03, 2010 4:37 am

I'm sorry to hear about all that's happened *hugs* hope things are better now.

Thank you for this chapter, it really worked like a charm after all the wait xD Very in-character with everyone. I could still see some slightly archaic/academic speech from Alice (meaning no abbreviations) but nowhere near as much as before, so good job on that! Can't wait for the next chapter Smile smiley face