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Friendship is Precious (PG-13)
by sivan.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [2]
Warnings [Character death, twist – Don’t say I didn’t warn y]
Thu Jul 13, 2006 10:33 pm
This is a very well written story. The only think I'm confused about is that it seems to end too soon. In the story Aragorn tells Legolas to read the letter to find out how Eldarion was killed which implies that there's more to the boy's death than just the war but it's never elaborated on so it seems to cut off too soon. Another thing that makes it seem to cut off too soon is the fact that Aragorn asks Legolas f he knows something Aragorn doesn't know, but it doesn't seem to expand much on that. But other than those things I really liked the story.
 
 
A Hero (PG-13)
by SamwiseTheStrong.
Chapters [4]
Reviews [3]
Warnings [None thus far.]
Wed Jul 05, 2006 10:41 pm
This is an interesting story and I think you have somewhat of a good start with it. I might suggest though that maybe you add more deatail to what you're writing because it seemed to read to fast. Mayeb expand a little bit more on the characters becuase right now they seemed a bit out of character. Maybe if you described their motives a little bit more, it might not seem that way, or if they are indeed out of character it would help you get them back into character.