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A Tangled Web (R)
by NiennaNir.
Chapters [38]
Reviews [104]
Tue May 22, 2007 12:36 pm
Poor Haldir...I feel bad for him here. One small suggestion though, you seem to be using the terms women and men for elliths and ellons at times. It's a small mistake that is easily made (I know I do it sometimes to) but it is noticeable and should be corrected. I've seen it in a few of the other chapters here too and I think the story would be better if the corrections were made.

You have a truly wonderful storyline here. I'm loving it.
 
 
A Tangled Web (R)
by NiennaNir.
Chapters [38]
Reviews [104]
Tue May 22, 2007 12:00 pm
Lol, highly amusing. I really liked the part about Elrond being able to clear the courtyard...
 
 
Surrender (PG-13)
by Forest.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Warnings [Mild sexual content]
Tue May 08, 2007 3:25 pm
Very beautiful. Erestor does need to loosen up and a lady friend would be the right way to do it... I would love to read a continuation of this, if possible...Very Happy smiley face
 
 
Forgotten Refugee (G)
by Papilio.
Chapters [11]
Reviews [5]
Warnings [None]
Mon Apr 30, 2007 8:01 pm
Aw! Very well played! I'm glad Erestor has finally been told what he needed to know.
 
 
Forgotten Refugee (G)
by Papilio.
Chapters [11]
Reviews [5]
Warnings [None]
Mon Apr 30, 2007 7:54 pm
OMG! I was thinking that it could be Gil-Galad around the 3rd or 4th chapter, but then I dismissed the notion as crazy. This is a very good story, though I think it could be better with some proof-reading. I love it though. Really, I do.

-P.G.
 
 
Forgotten Refugee (G)
by Papilio.
Chapters [11]
Reviews [5]
Warnings [None]
Mon Apr 30, 2007 7:30 pm
Oooh, you have my attention!
 
 
I don't know... (G)
by Hermit.
Chapters [3]
Reviews [8]
Warnings [none]
Mon Apr 30, 2007 7:26 pm
"You're drunk, aren't you?"

"Yep."

Lol, I think that says it all...nice drabble.
 
 
Haldir's First Love (NC-17)
by LoriAnne.
Chapters [10]
Reviews [4]
Warnings [OFC describes her rape in ch6 -- also graphic sex]
Thu Apr 26, 2007 2:20 pm
Perfect ending line in this chapter. Nicely done.
 
 
The Battle Hymn of Glorfindel (G)
by NiennaNir.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [25]
Warnings [rampant silliness]
Fri Mar 09, 2007 7:42 pm
Not bad, the lyrics go really well with the tune and I think the 2nd verse is very very funny, with the elf maids that will not be waylaid. Lol, nice work!
 
 
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