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Deceptive Chances (NC-17)
by Kendra.
Chapters [17]
Reviews [8]
Warnings [Sexual Situations]
Fri Nov 30, 2007 5:09 am
Great job! Keep up writing great stories such as this, and I will continue to read.
 
 
Little White Lies (NC-17)
by Aeode.
Chapters [10]
Reviews [13]
Warnings [Rape//Violence//Consentual Sex]
Wed Nov 28, 2007 4:04 am
Funnily enough, you had stated in your initial synopsis of this story that Legalos was going to help her overcome her hardships and that it was going to end happily. I don't think either happened in this story. This is definitely not a happy Romance story, definitely more Angst, and some sort of warning would have been appreciated.
Also, Legalos doesn't seem to be in character here. I don't think he would have ever been this cold and careless with another's feelings.
 
 
"Mysterious Fate" (NC-17)
by Cormak.
Chapters [37]
Reviews [98]
Warnings [minor language, battle scenes, sex between adults]
Thu May 31, 2007 11:56 am
Wow! This is one of the best fan-fics I have ever read. You have a great talent for writing. And a way to go for your beta - they did a great job editing.
The story flows very well, and the plot flows very nicely. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Suggestion (that you definitely don't have to take, but I'm such a romantic at heart and I hate the idea of one lover leaving the other), it would be so nice if either Kaitlyn somehow was given the gift of an elven life.
Keep up the great work and I can't wait until you update.