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End of Day (PG-13)
by Sharpeslass.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [some hint of sex]
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Fri May 21, 2004 11:18 pm
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What an awesome read. ou know, I often poke fun at Grima... it's my nature... but I do enjoy seeing dealt with in a more forgiving light. Who knows WHO he could have been had he not gotten wrapped up in the dark.  |
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Mary Goes to Mirkwood (NC-17)
by MaryA.
Chapters [36]
Reviews [ 16] Warnings [Adult sexual situations/ nudity/mild BDSM/implied]
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Mon May 17, 2004 6:46 pm
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You know, this story is campy at its best. It does not try to be The Great One - Tolkien, nor do you - or Mal - try to be him, which I greatly appreciate from the two of you. Therefore to anyone who reads this and says - - - WTF? - - - I say, let down your long hair, throw your bras to the wind, and find yourself a pointy eared Elf to just go have a good time with! And for all you canon whores who are screaming- ELVES DON'T DO THIS!!!! Go find a vibrator and uninhibit yourself because, yes they do! And if you don't agree, you are too uptight! For those of you who think Mary Sue is nasty thing, I pity you that you have never been truly loved by an Elf.
So go ye forth, Mary. Go ye forth Mal and Go ye forth Sheriaih and nail as many as those lovely pointy eared sex gods as youcan handle, because we all dream about it! |
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It cannot be.... (PG-13)
by BellemaineChercoeur.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 9] Warnings [Violence, death, battle - hey its set on the Field]
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Sat Apr 17, 2004 10:48 am
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My God! Very vivid! I have been on a Theodin kick lately and this just nails it and him in his last moments.
Fantabulous! |
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Do You Know Why I Sent For You? (NC-17)
by Ellbee.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 11] Warnings [Sex, wine]
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Fri Apr 16, 2004 6:44 am
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I think Tolkien dissed the Elves big time in the sex department and seeing how there is so much that was just notes and his son's spin on things, well... heckers! Elflings came from somewhere! So Elven sex bothers me not and arguing with me about is... well, you KNOW what that is like! (Yes, according to some, I'm deranged and nuts!  )
Regardless... this was wonderful! Glorious! I'll never look at Legolas the same again!
***off to find more*** |
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Brothers Under the Sun (G)
by Alkvingiel.
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Thu Apr 15, 2004 9:36 pm
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The song is wonderful and portrays the friendship between these 2 very well. 
Having it beta'd properly would make this lovely piece even better! |
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Trust To Hope (PG-13)
by Novedhelion.
Chapters [36]
Reviews [ 302] Warnings [Not much to speak of, except your usual sappy roma]
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Tue Apr 13, 2004 10:26 pm
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I am trying VERY hard to find the constructiveness in Jenapotumus' last review. There is not anything remotely constructive, therefore I feel she has a short attention span and is trying to blame the author. 
There is nothing - to me - more irritating than a story that wraps up with - they went to bed, got married, had babies and lived happily ever after. Real Life isn't that way. There is so much to Eomer's and Lothiriel's relationship and to try to wrap up the story to 'get it over with' would be a crime. JRRT gave us SO little to go on and I agree this particular pair should not be ignored or glossed over.
Besides, Eomer is SOOO hot... others might not be able to take the heat, but boy howdy - I'm enjoying it! |
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Amarië & Haldir: Paths of Destiny (R)
by Julie.
Chapters [18]
Reviews [ 23]
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Mon Mar 01, 2004 5:07 pm
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Folks.
Read this.
I can't say it any plainer than that.
This is why we read fanfiction. It is why some of us write. The excellence of this fic is unsurpassed.
Amarie is well rounded and a fully developed character. One WANTS her to achieve, wants her to win. Haldir is well developed as well; equal movie and book... brave, intense, arrogant and loving. He is an Elf, not a human with pointed ears. This is very important.
Each scene, each plot twist is carefully planted and thought out.
It is simply the best in its field... as is anything this author posts.
My hat is off, madam. You know me well enough to know, I don't take it off to just anyone |
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Elanor's Revenge (R)
by Julie.
Chapters [37]
Reviews [ 216]
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Mon Feb 09, 2004 11:57 pm
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Nah Ladies - this is STILL a WIP and believe me - these two are wonderful at dragging your heart around waiting for the next chapter - which is SO worth the wait.
I love this - I have loved it from day one and I want to know when is the next one coming out? |
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Tel' Lindar (The Bard) (NC-17)
by ZeeDrippyVessel.
Chapters [41]
Reviews [ 99] Warnings [if it should warned against, then it's here.]
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Tue Nov 25, 2003 12:27 pm
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LuckyObsidian said
> This keeps getting better and better! I dont know if you realise, your style of writing is changing ever so slightly. Chapters 3 onwards are so fluid and rich, i feel like im reading a professional novel.
Wow. Thank you.
>I love that Severus is staying a resolute character and is not gushy and out of canon (from what i understand of his persona).
Nothing I hate more than to see a canon toughie turned into a wuss. It won't happen to Snape. My HP beta is BRUTAL on him staying in character and if she ain't happy, neither am I! Snape will remain snarky!
>My only niggle is the HP stuff. Please keep it in the back of your mind that some of your readers are following this fic because we loved Empty Vessel and have never read the HP books so may not understand certain references you make.
Hmmmm - okay, the only clarifiers I saw would be a: Remus Lupin is a werewolf. A relunctant one, but one regardless. Snape brews a potion for him that lessens the affect of his changing. He still locks himself up on the nights of the full moon.
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b: Fluffy. Fluffy is a giant, drooling, 3 headed dog that is quite mean. The only way to soothe the beastie is to play music.
Any other questions? Please ask.
>Also - the music quotes... They are obviously very personal and meaningful to you. Is it possible for you to include the full song name and artist all of the time? Im having to do a lot of legwork on yahoo to trace some of them since i want to hear what you hear!
I usually post everything I have on them. If I use a GREAT deal of one song throughout - I will post the legalities once. If it's a song fic - I will post all of the info at the end. (I have to post them somewhere... legalities and such...)
>I can'twait for chapter 6! You never update fast enough for my greedy eyes!
Thursdays. Normally Thursdays. Have had RL issues - I moved home 2 weeks ago and between no phone and when I got phone, modem croaked and new one won't load, it's been difficult. I posted early this week because of the holiday.
Thank all of you so much for reading.
Zee |
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Harry Potter and the Heir of Gondor (PG)
by Neth.
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Sat Nov 15, 2003 9:35 am
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Several things.
This is a very interesting premise. Some wonderful ideas and some seriously bouncing bunnies. Neat concept for Harry to really be the son of Arwen and Aragorn.
Now for the "stuff" - -
1. Grey Company. Don't use them. Their "elvish" is really Grelvish - made up and not Tolkein. There a several more reliable ones - Encyclopeida of Arda, several others...
2. You need a beta. There are times when grammatical and other things glare out.
3. You need to smooth your transitions from object to object, conversation to conversation, create the flow.
4. In all honesty - I don't know if you will be able to make the "Harry isn't really Harry" angle fly. Perhaps a shared body experience or this other person in his head, creating havoc...
This is a wonderful rough draft and I honestly think that with some tweaking and working, this has the makings of a wonderful fic. Keep plugging.
Zee |
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