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Flame of Gondolin, book 3: What About Now (R)
by Malinwen.
Chapters [17]
Reviews [ 12] Warnings [arrogance, violence]
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Mon Apr 21, 2014 6:22 pm
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| Oh, a closer brush with the Nazgul and the first attempt to fight them off. Loved Uindor's barked laughter and observation as to how they escaped. "Hardly. Anárië set the bastard on fire." She blunted their awe quite effectively, even though she was suffering from what they would later name the 'black breath'. Awesome that Glorfindel showed up beside her, though they must have feared greatly to have summoned him from Imladris! Excellent chapter! |
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| Author's replied on Tue Apr 22, 2014 1:48 am |
| The Nazgul needed a bigger role than just hopping around looking dangerous, so I thought it would be something to explore - and the black breath was definitely something that I thought would be interesting, since we don't know a whole lot about it from Tolkien. The Elves, at the moment, are scrambling. Thank you for your kind review! |
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Flame of Gondolin, book 3: What About Now (R)
by Malinwen.
Chapters [17]
Reviews [ 12] Warnings [arrogance, violence]
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Mon Apr 07, 2014 7:42 pm
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| Wow, this was a big jump in time and a little confusing at the beginning. The transition might be something you want to add a little more detail to But I can totally understand why you did so - given the large breech of time you want to cover. The initial reunions at Imladris were very good. And it was no surprise that Ereinion gave Elrond Vilya. Still the love declared between Anarie and Glorfindel made me wish for more. Even though, as you point out - Anarie and Glorfindel are similar in their loyalty - and they would both be compelled to stay with their respective charges. Yet, I am very worried - given the fate of Anarie's charge, surely you do not think that will be her fate as well? At least, I hope not! I look forward to the next chapter! |
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| Author's replied on Tue Apr 08, 2014 1:07 am |
Thanks for the comment - I'll definitely look into defining the jumps more. Obviously, we all knew the King will give Elrond Vilya, but Anná didn't, and she's kind of pissed lol. And the conversation was short and to the point because there wasn't much to say ... as to that, however, you'll just have to wait and see. Thanks for reading  |
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'Til Death Do Us Part (PG-13)
by Haleth.
Chapters [46]
Reviews [ 55]
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Mon Apr 07, 2014 5:23 am
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| Inglor is so sweet in his worry. Finally, he and Haleth are actually communicating. Wow! THey rescued Idril! A lot of people including Elrond are going to be very surprised. Hey Valar? Why the enchantment. |
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| Author's replied on Mon Apr 14, 2014 5:33 pm |
Hello Athena568.
The enchantment was put into place in the First Age when none of the Elves who had gone back to Middle-earth were allowed to go back to Valinor. The islands are set between Middle-earth and the Blessed Realm. Tolkien mentions in the Silmarillion that anyone who set foot on one of the Enchanted Islands fell asleep and remained asleep until the end of the world, which I interpreted as the enchantment staying in place. Er.....I hope that makes sense!
Thank-you for the review.
Haleth |
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Flame of Gondolin, book 3: What About Now (R)
by Malinwen.
Chapters [17]
Reviews [ 12] Warnings [arrogance, violence]
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Tue Mar 25, 2014 2:10 am
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| So, Anárië did get to work out her frustrations on the practice yard - but was usually down in the dirt due to Lachuí's moves. Let's just hope her training proves to be enough. The scene with Lachuí and Anárië getting a first glimpse of the Nine was really creepy. They will soon find out what these riders represent. I wonder how that will change their perspectives on carrying the three elven rings? |
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| Author's replied on Tue Mar 25, 2014 7:16 am |
| Yes, Lachuí loves his boot camp - Anná, not so much haha. And if I succeeded in making the Ringwraiths scene even remotely creepy, then I'll consider it a win since that's what I was hoping for. The Ring problem will also surface eventually, yes. Thanks for reading and reviewing! |
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Where Is Love? (PG)
by curiouswombat.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 3] Warnings [Mentions of death]
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Sat Mar 22, 2014 7:55 pm
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| What a treat to hear about Tharhîwon's arrival in Valinor - and of his relationship with Frodo! Your tale makes a perfect case for how the little one is 'adopted' by Frodo and not by Elrond & Celebrian - though they do help too. Love Gandalf's appearance as well. Great story. |
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| Author's replied on Mon Mar 24, 2014 4:52 pm |
| Thank you - and yes - there was a bit of a gap there that needed filling... I'm glad this explains it well! |
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Flame of Gondolin, book 3: What About Now (R)
by Malinwen.
Chapters [17]
Reviews [ 12] Warnings [arrogance, violence]
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Wed Mar 12, 2014 5:10 pm
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| I like how you develop Anarie's character with all the little details - including how she has trouble with personal letters and how much she agonized over her letter back to Glorfindel. The King found it funny and the ensuing conversation with Ereinion was well written. So, Lachui has returned - with dire predictions and a warning from Glorfindel. "Something is coming, Anárië. I’m sure you can sense it. And I’m afraid we will not be ready when it does. Protect the King at all cost.’ Wow - if Anarie's own for boding is not enough. I can' help but grimace at what her next level of training will be like! Great chapter! |
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| Author's replied on Thu Mar 13, 2014 1:17 pm |
| Thank you - I try. I try to imagine her put on the spot, someone who's been trying to survive for the past thousand of years or so, and imagining her writing letters is just not something that works for her lol. But yes, something IS coming - and Lachuí gets to re-open boot camp for a while. Thanks again for reading and reviewing |
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Flame of Gondolin, book 3: What About Now (R)
by Malinwen.
Chapters [17]
Reviews [ 12] Warnings [arrogance, violence]
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Mon Feb 24, 2014 9:19 pm
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| Ah, thanks to Berien we finally get to the heart of Anárië's mixed and tumultuous feelings about Glorfindel. Glorfindel's letter was so dense - that he fears for her and thinks it likely that Sauron will turn his attention to Lindon is clear. But I was surprised and concerned to read his warning that she "trust only those closest to you" - does he fear another traitor - like Maeglin did he hear something while in Lindon that worried him? The closing lines were beautiful - she should not doubt that he loves her. Great chapter! |
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| Author's replied on Tue Feb 25, 2014 2:47 am |
| Berien has a knack of poking until she gets an answer, I agree. And as for Glorfindel - it remains to be seen! Thank you for the kind review. |
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'Til Death Do Us Part (PG-13)
by Haleth.
Chapters [46]
Reviews [ 55]
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Mon Feb 24, 2014 9:11 pm
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| I loved the interactions between Haleth and Ecthelion. You have a gift with dialogue. Poor Haleth - is she doomed to have Ecthelion and Glorfindel drive her crazy? |
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| Author's replied on Sun Mar 02, 2014 11:06 am |
| Is Haleth doomed to be driven crazy by her two valiant protectors? Most likely. |
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The Valinor Trail (R)
by curiouswombat.
Chapters [29]
Reviews [ 29] Warnings [canon character death in prologue]
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Wed Feb 12, 2014 8:18 pm
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| A nice change to show us a peak from the Ithilrim - with Ithilienne and Legolas. I am waiting to see Legolas' reunion with his Naneth. So, Haldir and the Maiar danced around the fire too - and perhaps Lord Orome hunted with the Silvans in the ancient past - perhaps these traditions are related. A nice thought as everyone celebrates though they are in different parts of the world. |
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| Author's replied on Fri Feb 14, 2014 6:43 pm |
| I wasn't 100% sue the structure of this chapter would work - going through the day from place to place, person to person. I was happy with it when finished, after some discussion with my beta, but knowing it works for you, too, is good! Glad you think it interesting that the Silvan traditions may date back to the time before the Valar set off to The West, too. |
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The Valinor Trail (R)
by curiouswombat.
Chapters [29]
Reviews [ 29] Warnings [canon character death in prologue]
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Tue Feb 11, 2014 4:53 pm
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| Wow, I missed a chapter - and what a chapter. I love your characterization of Lady Ferveren and how you gently transition her from newly returned to a body and welcomed by the trees to someone more at ease and then finally to one who was most definitely Queen and Thranduil's wife. "My husband’s cousin would certainly be happy there and so, assuredly, would his wife. Whereas I think my own people would be happier amongst oak and chestnut – a forest with broad leaved deciduous trees, and some evergreens – my Lord Husband would feel happiest there!" I also like how you show the two elleth getting to know each other and have Tindome convey what has gone on while Ferveren was in the Halls. Nice work! |
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| Author's replied on Fri Feb 14, 2014 6:40 pm |
| Thank you. I'm really happy that you like Ferveren as a character and the way she takes a little time to get used to being alive again - it is so good to know when introducing someone like that works! |
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