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Duty's Call : Tale 3- The Glorfindel Chronicles (PG)
by Devaeriel.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Sat Jan 08, 2005 1:41 pm

Great characterization! Well thought out....I loved the "training" scene and Glorfindel's attatchment to Estel and the Lady. I look forward to more.
 
 
Ancient Languages (PG-13)
by Imlosiel.

Chapters [5]
Reviews [8]
Wed Dec 29, 2004 10:14 pm

Oh what fun! The beginning was "very correct" in the life of a nerd...it felt most like my daily routine Wink smiley face
The character is begining to take shape and the writing flows well. The second chapter deals with the fustrations of language nicely. I look forward to more.
 
 
Finding Celebrian (PG-13)
by Dragon.

Chapters [13]
Reviews [4]
Sun Sep 26, 2004 7:14 pm

Highly emotional and well written....
 
 
Interrupted Journeys: Part Two--Journeys Perforce (PG-13)
by ellisk.

Chapters [15]
Reviews [19]
Warnings [Battle violence]
Sat Sep 25, 2004 7:19 pm

Happy Birthday! and aren't hurricanes so Fun!!! I have finally gotten power and cleaned up my flooded basement only to expect more of my new hobby! Fun, Fun, Fun! Boy, all you guys on the coast must be really having a ball! But, by now you at least know the routine Wink smiley face I hope all will be well.
Wow!

Really well done! The terror that the queen must have felt seeing the wounded .... and Thranduil seeing that she was safe...It just is tense. As always, the characters played true and the emotions were well drawn. Good imagery and nice humor. I look forward to more updates....

Now get it out of there and be safe!

Lome
 
 
The Bow (G)
by SpaceWeavil.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [10]
Sat Sep 25, 2004 7:08 pm

This is a splendid stand alone piece, but having the world of Alliance in mind, it is only more real. Oropher seems more cold. This, of course, only makes Thranduil a much more loving father.

I would say ditto to the other reviewers: great descriptions, characters have depth , and the emotions run deep!

Yes, Stories of Arda would be a great home for your work....
 
 
Interrupted Journeys: Part One--New Journeys (R)
by ellisk.

Chapters [26]
Reviews [43]
Warnings [Sexual situations-not the main focus]
Sat Sep 18, 2004 9:24 am

What a fun wedding....well done. I look forward to the rest of the tale.

Again, thanks for all of your hard work.
 
 
Thranduil's Bargains (NC-17)
by Ingole.

Chapters [16]
Reviews [44]
Warnings [Explicit sex; animal death]
Sat Sep 18, 2004 8:10 am

Bravo! I look forward to more!

This one had so much humor.

Thanks for the fun tale
 
 
Interrupted Journeys: Part One--New Journeys (R)
by ellisk.

Chapters [26]
Reviews [43]
Warnings [Sexual situations-not the main focus]
Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:26 pm

You are back! I was quite concerned that you had had to leave because of xxxx.

Chapter 21 was fine. Elrond aiding Thranduil was grand. But, alas, the weaving is destroyed....that does not make one feel that Lindomiel is safe. We shall see. (Any bets on Marti being involved?)

P.S. Thank you for the message. It worked and I am feel more secure in the information.
 
 
Interrupted Journeys: Part One--New Journeys (R)
by ellisk.

Chapters [26]
Reviews [43]
Warnings [Sexual situations-not the main focus]
Sat Sep 11, 2004 11:49 am

Wow! I feel so lucky to find you at 2 places...

Amglaur shows respect to the king and it is not too painful. He really does love his little one and the idea that this lord may feel something towards his child must be distasteful. Yet, Thranduil has proven himself to be honorable and gentle with Lindomiel. This is a good sign.

Lindomiel is excited from her meeting with the Men. Hairy and smelly....spices, and potatoes- just so many new things to explore. She certainly has spunk. I loved the bit about soap.

Thranduil has finally admited his love, how touching. In turn, Lindomiel has much compassion . How amusing to think that she and the Queen have been discussing royal duties-and the King has been totally ignorant to such conversations.

Yes, Marti will be dangerous. She has already tried to stir up trouble and now will be even more upset. This does not look pleasant for our couple.

I hope that your husband has a little bit of a break this weekend. And good luck with ####. You are right about the "goodness" of discussing literature. Sometimes I have had a completely different take on the events after reading a review. It can only help the author to know that we, the readers, really do cherish a great tale....

Again, Thanks for all of your hard work.
Mina Sedh, Hisie Lome
 

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Last edited by HisieLome on Sat Sep 11, 2004 11:52 am
 
Interrupted Journeys: Part One--New Journeys (R)
by ellisk.

Chapters [26]
Reviews [43]
Warnings [Sexual situations-not the main focus]
Fri Sep 10, 2004 9:47 pm

Well, think of the Hurricanes as adding excitement to your life (and giving your husband a new hobby)- I hope all is ok.

This tale just keeps getting better! Chapter 18 has shown how low Marti will go. I am sure it will only get worse. Thranduil is dashing and the courtship is pleasant. Each character has a strong personality. The voice of each character rings true... motives and behaviors just feel right.

I do look forward to more.
Thanks for all of the hard work-
Mina Sedh, Hisie Lome