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The Aftermath - sequel to The Conversation (R)
by sheraiah.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [conversations about sexuality]
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Wed Jul 09, 2003 2:11 pm
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A most charming insight of Legolas and Aragorn friendship.
Legolas is very well portrayed as a young elfling, and the balance between his seriousness and his playful nature deserves great praise. Aragorn is so sweet I have the silliest desire to bring him to life so I can toss his hair and generally spoil him rotten.
the elf-lords are amazingly done.
summing it up - You're great with characterizations. Congratulations.
"I am not an elf!"
"You seem to have forgotten it."
laughed myself silly with those two. |
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Red Dawn, Golden Flower (PG)
by Viv.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 21] Warnings [character death]
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Wed Jul 09, 2003 9:48 am
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I cried.
need I say more?
Wonderfully written, delightfully canon, and just the perfect amount of angst and love, duty and survival.
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Experiment Gone... Right? (PG)
by Viv.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 17] Warnings [songfic; suefic; karaoke]
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Tue Jul 08, 2003 5:16 pm
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HOLY COW
unbelievable.
for god's sake, woman!
someone could have an asthma attck over that, did you know?
Congratulations. It's superb. |
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Experiment Gone... Right? (PG)
by Viv.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 17] Warnings [songfic; suefic; karaoke]
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Tue Jul 08, 2003 5:15 pm
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Holy Cow!
'And he knew a thing or two about adoration.'
I am just SO STUNNED! this is unbelievably funny. really.
Felicitation,s dearest. It's outstanding. |
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Only Time (R)
by Capriole.
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Wed Jul 02, 2003 4:50 pm
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| Hurry up and update! |
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The virtues of reading the books (PG)
by Meneltari.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 16]
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Tue Jul 01, 2003 9:26 am
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I learned lots from this essay. Had no idea one could track down all those languages (I knew about Quenya and sindarin, the ones I see and hear about often, but not the others. Though it's logic, after you think about it.)
Nice to see someone is delving in the canon research. I will point out only that sometimes the idea is rather good (or the author thinks so at leas) and there's something called poetic license. Not that I like the Fair princess from Silverwood either, but there are things that can be done -wisely - and make the story interesting.
If nothing else, you'll get a bit of experience. Everyone of us - And I do mean EVERY ONE - has a story/ couple of stories in the dark deep dungeons of the computer, those few first stories that you would not show anyone else right now but once got all your attention and work.
It's hard, but sometimes we have a pearl in it. Guess we need to warn and councel, but let the paths open for the author's creativity. Who knows.
Other than that, it's was a very enjoyable essay. Nice Job. |
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My Lady (NC-17)
by Terri.
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Sat Jun 28, 2003 4:26 pm
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| Pretty naughty. Good job |
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The World that Was (PG)
by TerriViv.
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Sat Jun 28, 2003 11:19 am
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The only flaw of this fic is that it's entirely too short. You have a very interesting style, leaving the ending up for the reader to decide, everything hinted and not said...
Although, from the reader's point of view, I should ask you to consider developing it a bit more. I reckon writing Legolas (at least writing well) is hard, more so in a place that we know not well (Valinor), but yet there were so many possibilities unchecked there... Do not be afraid to risk. After all, we're here to help you, right?
Because without more things happening, it's a bit hard to believe anyone would decide to simply stay in valinor forever (as was hinted) no matter how wonderful it might be. The girl ought to have a family, friends (we know she has a job already, and she was pretty good at it or else she would not get such a delicate work). One does not throw all of that out (not being an overly hormone-driven teenage, that is) just because that piece of heaven asked her to stay. The little bit of intimacy was missing -whatever it was that Legolas did or said that made her sure she had a chance, something to stay for.
Consider this a constructive criticism.
And I really did love the style. and descritptions. Can't tell that much about characterization 'cause it was brief, but well done.
I'll keep my eyes open for your next works. |
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Mists of Valinor (PG-13)
by Genesis.
Chapters [12]
Reviews [ 23] Warnings [giving birth, mild sexuality]
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Thu Jun 26, 2003 4:57 pm
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Yay! Elladan jealous! Elrond resents Celebrian ressentment for his brother... Erestor's a nice old elf with the twins.
So cozy and nice...
Love this fic, period. You're doing an amazing job.  |
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Gratitude (NC-17)
by dolarabee.
Chapters [2]
Reviews [ 16] Warnings [Light bondage]
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Thu Jun 26, 2003 4:20 pm
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Waiting for more with my breath held.
one complain only - do we have to wait too long?  ops:
I :love: this fic. |
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