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Spoils of War (R)
by Aearwen2.
Chapters [14]
Reviews [27]
Sun Feb 21, 2010 1:13 am
Loved it! I can't wait to read the next installment! Very Happy smiley face
 
Author's replied on Sun Feb 21, 2010 3:51 am
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying this.
 
Pay Off (R)
by RobinKa.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Warnings [Gory imagery; language]
Thu Feb 04, 2010 2:59 pm
Oh wow! This is nice. I particularly like the very last line. I feel as if with those words she's closing that chapter of her life(unlife?). I also liked how your use of similes to describe the setting at the beginning, that really pulled me in. The detail with the doorknob was great too. When she asks number eight's corpse which question she didn't answer, I could almost smell her blood. Oh, this piece is just delicious. Smile smiley face
 
Author's replied on Fri Feb 05, 2010 3:40 am
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm very happy that you liked this short fic -- my first original stuff in English I've ever posted anywhere, so yeah, I was kind of reluctant. Especially that the story itself isn't "nice". Your response gave me much confidence. Thank you!

Binka
 
Killing Time (R)
by Sulriel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [4]
Warnings [disturbing themes]
Wed Feb 03, 2010 4:18 pm
Wow, that was really great! I like the way you make her inhuman right away with the counting so that when you throw in the shape-shifting thing it just clicks. I think my favorite thing is definitely how everything just ties together so nicely. Your character also left an impression but I can't put my finger as to the reason.
 
Author's replied on Thu Feb 04, 2010 2:19 pm
Thanks! I'm so glad you picked up all the nuances. They were fun to weave in.