Reviews by Monaleoht

The Teacher · Thu Apr 15, 2004 4:59 am

I'm back and I've just finished chp. 23! This is great and the story is developing well....... still curious about "him" however? Wink smiley face

A lot of well thought out tension.... Keep writing! Very Happy smiley face

Trust To Hope · Sat Apr 03, 2004 3:26 pm

Great! *sniff* they're so in love! *bawls eyes out* It's so happy... just get rid of that *** ** * ***** Fenwick! *sniff* Though if the guards gossip...... then Fenwick will find out! He had better not try to force himself on her.... or I will come and get him! Wink smiley face

Anyway, the new chapter is wonderful! And how they're together..... yet can't be......*sniff* It's wonderful! Keep writing! Very Happy smiley face

A Tangled Web · Sat Apr 03, 2004 10:44 am

WAIT! I've just noticed that Elladan was with Elrohir.... which means you haven't put in the conversation!?! You've got to add it... or put it as a backflash or something.... or Indelin asks... whatever! I'm so curious!?! Very Happy smiley face

A Tangled Web · Sat Apr 03, 2004 10:37 am

SO FUNNY! Thank you so much! You've made my week! Very Happy smiley face

The scene at the clearing with Arwen and Aragorn was so... sweet! I loved the phrase "pure adoration on his face" or however you put it! But don't let Haldir fade.... let him loosen up! It's not fair....... Sad smiley face

! Also, about Meril and Orophin...... he won't give up easily will he??? *worried look* I'm still wondering about Meril... what makes her think the way she does about binding...? Anyway, Galadriel and Celeborn are so cute! And so childish, in a good way, together! They're so fun and... hopelessy in love! Yay! Very Happy smiley face

I can't wait for the next part... perhaps we'll here about Erestor and Elladan's *cough* conversation? bol..... I liked how Erestor is nice... but he's a little *cough* old no? Wink smiley face

Anyway, I'm not certain anymore if Orophin still feels so strongly about Meril... I mean, that scene when Indelin was healing... or maybe he does... there were a lot of well thought-out contradictions! Wink smiley face

But does Indelin still have feelings for Orophin... I mean, she wasn't exactly..... *cough* pleasant with him! Anyway, it was better than all of the other chapters... though the quality improves every chapter no? Very Happy smiley face

I can't wait! Especially for Erestor and Elladan to have their .... talk? If you could call it that! bol....

Anyway, have to go... read it again! Very Happy smiley face

The Teacher · Fri Apr 02, 2004 4:05 pm

going great! But who is he? Come on, give us a name? *puppy-eyes* please? Wink smiley face

The Teacher · Fri Apr 02, 2004 4:48 am

Interesting... who was that at the pool though?!? Anyway, it's got a good start.... Very Happy smiley face

The Battle Hymn of Glorfindel · Thu Apr 01, 2004 3:54 pm

GREAT! WONDERFUl! Very Happy smiley face

Just love it.. kind of sad though.. I mean the end... Wink smiley face

but truly enchanting! Very Happy smiley face

The Teacher · Thu Apr 01, 2004 10:36 am

Very intresting... a spanking? lol.. Very Happy smiley face

The Teacher · Wed Mar 31, 2004 3:54 pm

SO GREAT! Keep writing! I suspected something like that... but her reaction.... this has got to be funny! Can't wait! Wink smiley face

Life is But A Dream · Wed Mar 31, 2004 10:03 am

A true masterpiece! I've just discovered it and I can't wait for more! ROFL smiley face

The part with the tree *gasps for breath* and they lost! *breathing stops as laughter overwhelms* ! Very Happy smiley face

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