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Snorg: Letters from Mordor (PG)
by Viv.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 25]
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Tue Jun 22, 2004 8:07 am
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 ROFLMAO , very funny! |
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Lord of the Glittering Harem (G)
by Viv.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 21] Warnings [facial hair]
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Tue Jun 22, 2004 7:59 am
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 Teehee that was funny and sweet! I love that you gave Gimli such awfull taste in decorating. Bravo! |
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Finding Courage (PG-13)
by Zimraphel.
Chapters [5]
Reviews [ 6] Warnings [Violence, character death]
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Mon Jun 07, 2004 2:55 am
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 Ow how I cried when I read this... I love your characterization of Glorfindel, Idril and Tuor. Very realistic. I'm of to read your other Glorfindel stories.
Greetz,
Isilme |
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The Eleventh Hour (PG-13)
by Zimraphel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 7] Warnings [character death, implied rape]
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Mon Jun 07, 2004 2:50 am
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| Fantasic fic. I think this is one of your best stories. But then, I love all your stuff. |
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Cuivië (G)
by Zimraphel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 6] Warnings [none]
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Mon Jun 07, 2004 2:37 am
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Sweet, that 's the first word that comes to mind after reading this wonderful little piece of art. I love your style of writing, as Haleth said: True to the spirit of Tolkien.
Greetz,
Isilme |
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I Bequeath (G)
by Zimraphel.
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Sat Jun 05, 2004 7:46 am
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| Utterly beautiful, you truly make charcters from the Silm and UT come alive. |
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Okay, NOW Panic! (PG-13)
by boz4PM.
Chapters [60]
Reviews [ 382] Warnings [none as yet]
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Mon May 10, 2004 9:33 am
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Yay, the sequel has already begun!  I love it so far, and am very curious to see where this is going. Is there going to be some major action and adventure or maybe evan a Penny/? romance??? Can't wait to find out....
You Rock!
Greetz,
Isilme |
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Brothers (G)
by Tinni.
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Thu Apr 15, 2004 5:48 pm
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Aaaaaaw that was so sweet. It's really nice to see another side to the relationship between the sons of Finwe. I never really realised that Feanor had to be a full adult by the time Finarfin and Fingolfin where born. I think you wrote a very sweet, although short (write more, hint, hint )story.
Isilme |
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Laundry Day (NC-17)
by dolarabee.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 16]
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Tue Apr 13, 2004 10:29 am
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*pant* *sweat* *sigh* Well that was one excellent smutty story....Callie is such a lucky girl! I'm off to read the sequell, a bit of Legolas-smut is just what I need after reading this
Great job!
Greetz,
Isilme |
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Black Death (PG)
by irishelf.
Chapters [19]
Reviews [ 6] Warnings [None I hope]
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Sun Mar 28, 2004 8:09 pm
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I like the idea of the Black Death hitting Middle Earth, and I found your story an entertaining read. However, I do have some constructive comments.
First of all, you should really check your story on spelling and grammar errors. There are quite a few of them. Your grammar does improve in later chapters, but I would reccomend to go over your story again and filter out any errors you find. If you need help with this, I am willing to point out the errors I found. Furthermore, I would like to point out that the Lordly elf from Gondolin is called GlorfiNdel, not Glorfidel. 
Secondly, I think it would really improve your story if you try to go deeper into the feelings of the characters. For example, in chapter 3 Elrond is concerned about the effect that the death of Estel will have on his sons, because he believes they love the boy very much. But then, in chapter four, it suddenly becomes clear that Elladan hardly shows any affection to young Estel and that Elrond thinks he hates Estel. This train of thought is very confusing for the reader so you may want to think about rewriting certain parts, so that your characters feelings become more consistent.
I want to empasize that I think your story has great potential. If you tweak it a little it could be a really good story.
Greetz,
Isilme |
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