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Butterfly-Cocoon (PG)
by Rous.
Chapters [22]
Reviews [72]
Warnings [Pretty much G-PG for violence]
Sat May 08, 2004 2:21 pm
I was just looking at your last chapters, to determine if I wanted to read the whole story... Were you aware that the last chapter is a repeat of the prior one? Thought you'd like to know...
 
 
Oath Renewed (G)
by inglor.
Chapters [4]
Reviews [13]
Warnings [none]
Thu May 06, 2004 11:44 pm
Very interesting story! I enjoyed reading it.
 
 
Moonlight On Summer Leaves (PG)
by SilverMoonLady.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [8]
Sat Apr 24, 2004 4:36 am
Absolutely delightful story! Thank you for the creative and different view of Hobbit life.
 
 
Spring Awakenings (R)
by daw.
Chapters [15]
Reviews [8]
Mon Apr 19, 2004 4:25 am
I've read all your terrific stories, Daw, and this one is my favorite!
 
 
Trust To Hope (PG-13)
by Novedhelion.
Chapters [36]
Reviews [302]
Warnings [Not much to speak of, except your usual sappy roma]
Sat Apr 17, 2004 12:48 am
I don't usually like romances, but this story has really intrigued me! I think your development of the characters and the relationships between them - especially the siblings - is very well-done and enjoyable.

Galadriel's comment to Fenwick caused my "ears to prick up". I've noticed that you haven't explained just how he and his family managed to protect the other port from the Corsairs of Umbar. Is the Fenwick family in cahoots with the Corsairs? Do they bribe the pirates? Or do they ensure safety for their port by providing strategic information about other locations in Gondor that are more vulnerable? You never explained why Fenwick was sneaking into Imrahil's office and snooping around... (Can you tell I just plain don't trust that guy? LOL!)

Keep up the good writing!
 
 
A Hole Possessed (G)
by Marta.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [7]
Sat Apr 17, 2004 12:29 am
Lovely work, Marta!
 
 
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