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For All Things a Cost (PG)
by Sulriel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 5] Warnings [dark theme]
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Sun May 21, 2006 4:16 pm
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Wow, Becky! Even your *Orcs* are subversive! 
Nice work!
- Barbara |
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Vain Glory (PG)
by Sulriel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [theme]
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Mon May 15, 2006 8:19 pm
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Wow, this gave me chills..... very powerful, Becky!
- Barbara |
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Wicked Water (G)
by Sulriel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 2] Warnings [n/a]
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Thu May 04, 2006 5:16 pm
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Oh, yes -- I do like this version better! I think rearranging the lines does increase the impact (though I hadn't previously noticed the "flaws" you solved -- but the author always knows best  )
I think mentioning the horse's name first really does sharpen the focus, also.....
I like it, Sulriel!
- Barbara |
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Wicked Water (G)
by Sulriel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 2] Warnings [n/a]
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Wed May 03, 2006 8:53 pm
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Oh, this is scary, Sulriel! It seems like they are surrounded by horrors -- so heartwrenching!
I feel so strongly for this horse, and he/she seems real to me.... Very well done!
- Barbara |
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Fun with Farm'n (PG-13)
by Sulriel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 12] Warnings [Orc humor]
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Wed Apr 26, 2006 8:32 pm
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Such a dark, twisted, evil mind..... Congratulations!
*wicked wink*
- Barbara |
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The Hours (PG)
by Thevina.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [reference to torture]
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Wed Mar 08, 2006 8:23 pm
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Hi Thevina!
I truly enjoyed this! Each vignette is compelling, and it's interesting how you tie them together with the senses, not just the shared timeframe...
I especially like all the corners of canon that you have worked into the vignettes, like the horrific destruction at Lórien, the birds communicating with Dale-men and Dwarves, Dernhelm's unwitting revelation...
I only have one tiny quibble, for you to consider or ignore at your pleasure: describing Haldir's eyes as amber jarred me a bit; I got the impression that most elven eyes are gray (or grey in British  ), so, even if they are not gray, it seems likely to me that they would be standard eye colors (blue, brown, ...) -- and amber seems odd in that context.
Anyway, these vignettes are very well-written, and delightful to read.
- Barbara |
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Seven Deadly Sins (R)
by isilelensar.
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Wed Feb 01, 2006 6:31 pm
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Very nice work, Isil! I couldn't wait to see which characters you decided to use for each sin.... what a wide variety!
- Barbara |
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Real Valar Do Not Eat Quiche (PG)
by Haleth.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [Extreme silliness]
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Mon Jan 09, 2006 3:20 pm
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Bwahahahahaha! This is even funnier - and more delightfully silly - the second time that I've read it!
I will never again look at quiche quite the same.... or the Valar, for that matter!
- Barbara |
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The Ring (G)
by Vilwarin.
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Sun Jan 08, 2006 5:53 pm
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Oh, nice twist, Wilwarin! You really had me caught in the wrong assumption, right until the last phrase.... Well done!
- Barbara |
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When Warriors Woo (PG)
by NancyBrooke.
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Sun Jan 08, 2006 5:49 pm
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Very nice, Nancy! I'm usually not a fan of romance, but this was much more interesting than most courting (or quasi-courting) stories..... not at all the fluff you mentioned in your note.
Both their characters seemed right, given the clues we have from the books. But gah! that Boromir is so darn arrogant! 
- Barbara |
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