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New Magic - A Tale of a Blue Wizard (NC-17)
by Ingole.
Chapters [20]
Reviews [ 29]
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Sat Aug 20, 2005 9:47 pm
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I really love the pairing of Tari and Celeborn. In the scene where they are in the tree together, and the child comes by and catches a glimpse of them, I can almost feel Celeborn's happiness. He seems so youthful and joyful in this story. His excitement over the baby was fantastic.
I really enjoyed this chapter. Great job!
Michelle... |
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Crossroads of Time (PG-13)
by ellie.
Chapters [24]
Reviews [ 76] Warnings [violence; suggestive situations]
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Sat Aug 20, 2005 9:27 pm
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Fantastic chapter, Ellie! 
I was wondering what the fall-out would be like after Ariella's confession, but NEVER did I imagine that Glorfindel would treat her and the children like that.
Your characterizations are so wonderful. Even though Glorfindel treated his family terribly, I still felt sorry for him. After all, he had just found out that his wife and children were not what they appeared to be. You have to give the guy a little slack for that reason alone.
The children were wonderful. I think including them into this chapter definitely gave us a glimpse of their family life. I'm glad that Glorfindel finally came around...although it took a almost tragic event for that to happen.
Very well done. I can't wait to read your next update.
Michelle... |
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Eternal (NC-17)
by trekqueen.
Chapters [59]
Reviews [ 55]
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Sat Aug 20, 2005 8:33 pm
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Oh, you've written another wonderful chapter!
I can't believe that Elrilya left without resolving her issues with Glorfindel. Of course, he left before she did, but still...she could have waited for him to return.
And what is Taurnil up to? He seemed to have enjoyed rubbing the fact that he and Elrilya are together, into Glorfindel's face. What was that about? It's almost as if he's intentionally causing friction between Elrilya and Glorfindel.
I'll keep my fingers crossed that Glorfindel will "snap out of it" in the next chapter. I can't believe that he rejected her! Grrrr...
Can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon.
Michelle... |
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Country Side (R)
by SilentTears.
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Fri Jul 22, 2005 7:47 pm
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Well, I couldn't wait for you to post the rest of the chapters at the other website, so I figured I sneak over here and read what you had posted. 
I'm very anxious for you to post the next chapter! I'm dying to find out exactly how they know each other, and what exactly happened to this mysterious maiden that Legolas mentioned.
Great job! Update soon.
Michelle... |
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Captured Heart (R)
by Maeluiril.
Chapters [39]
Reviews [ 64] Warnings [mentions of child abuse]
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Fri Jul 22, 2005 7:37 pm
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 Yay! A new chapter!!
Your characterization of Haldir is so wonderful. I love the caring and gentle side of him; it's really nice to see him as a doting father, and now, grandfather.
I felt a little sorry for Zinnia when Arador had to leave...I hope everything goes well with his mission. And the interaction between Orophin and the baby was so sweet. That scene really did bring a smile to my face.
I'm very glad that this story will continue. Keep up the great work!
Michelle... |
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The Shield-maid's Dance of Death (PG)
by Marta.
Chapters [2]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [violence, fatalism]
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Thu Jul 21, 2005 9:38 pm
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I absolutely loved this piece. Your words captured the moment, perfectly.
Great job!
Michelle... |
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Eternal (NC-17)
by trekqueen.
Chapters [59]
Reviews [ 55]
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Sun Jul 17, 2005 4:10 pm
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Trekqueen! You have no idea how surprised and delighted I was to find a new chapter posted. Yay!
Well, I see now that I had every reason to worry about Taurnil’s arrival. I loved the sparring scene between Elrilya and Taurnil. Can you say “sexual tension?” 
Elrilya didn’t seem to mind Taurnil’s company, though, did she? In fact, they seemed to be getting VERY comfortable with one another on that tree branch. But she does seem genuinely interested in him, so...who knows, right? Maybe a relationship with him will push her closer to Glorfindel. *crosses fingers and hopes*
Ohhhh, I wonder what Glorfindel will think of all of this! A love triangle! I love it!
Yes, yes...I know that no one has exchanged ‘I love yous’ but you know what I mean.
Thanks for posting another chapter so soon! Yet, another wonderful update...and it was full of surprises! Great job!
Michelle... |
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New Magic - A Tale of a Blue Wizard (NC-17)
by Ingole.
Chapters [20]
Reviews [ 29]
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Wed Jul 13, 2005 10:58 am
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I loved this chapter!
Although I already knew that they Celeborn and Tari loves each other, it was great to see what their friends had to say about their relationship. I loved the conversations that each group had about the problems, or at least perceived problems in their relationship. Thranduil and Glin are such wonderful characters. I loved them in Thranduil's Bargains, and am thrilled to see them in this story as well. Fantastic.
Something that really stands out in your writing is your use of animals. I *LOVE* the way you personify your animals, and give them human-like characterizations and personalities. The minx, the warg, Dolen...to me, they are all important characters, that have consistantly reflected the moods of the characters. Fabulous! I love it!
Great job! I'll be looking forward to your next update!
Michelle... |
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Elanor's Revenge (R)
by Julie.
Chapters [37]
Reviews [ 216]
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Wed Jul 13, 2005 10:39 am
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You know, I don't know how you ladies manage to continually write such wonderful chapters. It really is amazing. The plotlines for your characters are just so darn intriguing! I can't help but to love this story.
The Tarwe and Lurien drama really is heartbreaking. Healea's intervention will hopefully get Lurien to realize exactly how aweful he's being to Tarwe. After all, she does not have to be with him...she could easily just be rid of him, and *ATTEMPT* to seek companionship elsewhere. You know, I'm starting to like Healea more and more. She'd be a great friend to have.
Rumil and Nerwen are hoot! I love Rumil's playful nature. He and Nerwen compliment each other well. As for Orophin and Doria, I'm so glad that they've decided to bond. They've loved each other for so long...it's about time.
And of course Haldir and Elanor. Whew. I'm still anxious to hear them say to one another, "I love you." Of course, they know it...everyone knows it...but when will they say it to each other.
The letters to Elanor really made me realize how much Elanor has changed...how much her life has changed. What a brat her sister is! Whew...
And so now I'm on pins and needles wondering what this vision of Galadriel's is about. Ohhh, I can't wait to find out.
Fantastic chapter, ladies!
Michelle... |
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Eternal (NC-17)
by trekqueen.
Chapters [59]
Reviews [ 55]
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Wed Jul 13, 2005 9:50 am
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I've enjoyed both of your updates, Trekqueen!
I love the way that you have established a solid foundation for Glorfindel and Elrilya's relationship. I can tell that trush, honesty, and openness are of great importance to both of them.
We know that they are the best of friends, and in many ways depend of each other for companionship. So...I can't wait to see how/if Taurnil will affect their relationship. Will his presense bring them together, or seperate them further apart. Ohhhhh, I can't wait to find out.
You're doing a wonderful job! Update soon.
Michelle... |
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