Reviews by Rous

Last Dance · Wed Jun 08, 2005 11:13 am

Surprised by the ending. Very good! And your first? I am impressed. (I threw away more than I have posted.) Such a build-up. Thank you for sharing.

Seeing Stone · Wed Jun 08, 2005 11:10 am

I am not one much up on Gondor, but this is a very nice drabble. I could almost sense the ambition in Denethor. Thank you for sharing.

Fell Beast III: Fluffy's First Flight · Wed Jun 08, 2005 11:08 am

Oh, please, no more. This was just too funny. I read the first installment *note to self, read the rest* and this makes a fine addition. I am waiting for the book. Thank you for sharing.

Until Light Returns · Wed Jun 08, 2005 11:05 am

This is wonderful. A memory that can take you through the ages. (And I cannot remember what I ate last night.) You can almost see Greenwood through his eyes. Thank you for sharing.

Those Who Challenge The Dead ... · Wed Jun 08, 2005 11:01 am

Very well-written. I could feel the anguish of his disappointment. I admit that I hated drabbles, mostly because I could not get the hang of them. Now, I appreciate the concise manner in which they must be written. Less is more. You have done an outstanding job with this. Thank you for sharing.

Paths We Tread · Tue Jun 07, 2005 1:21 pm

I just thought it was great. I did not find it too flowery (but maybe that is because I like more formal language). One thing I do find disconcerting is the switch from present to past tense. I think it should remain one or the other. Other than that, I am glad I saw this on the story of the day. It is well worth the side trip from my daily doings. Thank you for sharing.

Danse Macabre · Wed Jun 01, 2005 5:59 am

Very nicely done. This had great imagery; it made you witness the action. And for a drabble, it managed to convey three hundred words worth. Thank you for sharing.

Leaves of Gold & Threads of Silver · Fri May 27, 2005 8:29 am

This was remarkable. Very vivid and real. And you give just enough information to make assumptions as to who they are. Very well written. And believable. Thank you for sharing.

Wild and Untamed Thing · Mon May 23, 2005 1:37 pm

I thought this a nice little romp. It was humorous without being comedic or a parody. I do have to say, though, that I found most of the characters slightly out of...well, character. I am not complaining. I can read a story for the sake of the story without disecting it for canon flaws. And I did enjoy it, very much. Thank you for sharing.

Together · Tue May 10, 2005 9:29 am

A very tender and filling glimpse. I have no idea what I can add to the other comments. This was very well written and shows a great understanding of being in love. Thank you for sharing.

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