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Shadow
Joined: 18 Jun 2006
Reviews: 32
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Thu Jul 13, 2006 5:53 am
i quite enjoyed this story
i can well imagine it taking place! Very Happy smiley face who could resist Stirider? Razz smiley face
 
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krazykataave

Joined: 17 Dec 2004
Reviews: 127
Location: Immortalized by John Denver
Thu Jul 13, 2006 3:11 pm
An enjoyable read. I like that the action moved quickly and the humor in it.
 
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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Fri Jul 14, 2006 3:16 am
“But I’ve never seen the girl in my life!” Aragorn protested.

What an opening line!! This had me sitting on the edge of my seat immediately, really wanting to know what happened. And actually, the way you write this story kept me glued to the screen and making me really wanting to know what would happen next. The way you wrote it is delightfully active and evocative. The story feels complete and makes it an enjoyable read. At the end it leaves me wondering how long Legolas knew Gwyneth was hiding a pillow under her dress and he seemed to have waaay to much fun with his friends predicament. And poor Aragorn, there is something about this young ranger that is so wonderful. Taking pride in really knowing when he makes love to a woman, not wanting to embarras the lady in question too much and even when the truth comes out he reacts vey gallantly. Thumb smiley face Thanks for sharing this with us!
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Fri Jul 14, 2006 11:34 am
I'll second Rhapsy's review by saying that this was a great read Very Happy smiley face I like your portrayal of Aragorn. His confusion is amusing Wink smiley face I also like a mirthful Legolas. All in all, I enjoyed this short story very much and I'm looking forward to reading more of your works.


Best wishes,

Binka
 
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Anna

Joined: 29 Jan 2004
Reviews: 108
Location: Sweden
Fri Jul 14, 2006 12:20 pm
Oh, I really liked this one! Laughing smiley face
Poor Aragorn...*snicker*

Your portrayal of young Aragorn was excellent and Legolas was great! I like him a bit snotty and smirking. Very Happy smiley face

Thanks for sharing!

Anna
 
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imaginigma

Joined: 14 Jul 2006
Reviews: 3
Location: Europe
Sat Jul 15, 2006 3:58 pm
Hi! I really like this story, although I think I told you that already. Very Happy smiley face And yeah, I am here now too! *waves*
 
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
Thu Jul 20, 2006 10:47 pm
hahahahaha... now here's one good tounge-in-cheek humour!
 
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ArwenUndomiel

Joined: 13 Aug 2006
Reviews: 55
Location: Australia
Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:41 am
Very funny! Poor Aragorn, his confusion was hysterical to read! I loved it and I hope to see more from you!
 
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