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pib2cheeks
Joined: 19 Jul 2004
Reviews: 23
Location: Ohio
Thu Apr 12, 2007 1:55 pm
Yay! He went after her. I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon.
 
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nariel
Joined: 04 Jan 2007
Reviews: 21
Location: 
Thu Apr 12, 2007 4:23 pm
You're leaving it like that?! How cruel!
Seriously, though, this was an excellent chapter. I liked your depiction of Haldir's lighter, easier demeanor. Please write again soon -- don't keep us in suspense for too long!!
 
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melz
Joined: 06 Sep 2005
Reviews: 8
Location: London
Thu Apr 12, 2007 4:40 pm
I too love the new, happier, and perky Haldir. Poor healer she doesn't stand a chance. Can't wait for the next chapter. More please!
 
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005
Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
Sun Apr 15, 2007 7:35 pm
Wow this is getting better and better. The sensual tension is so strong. I hope she gets what she deserves. I wish I was in her shoes and got what I 'DESERVE!!(lol) (Now where is my husband!)
 
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nariel
Joined: 04 Jan 2007
Reviews: 21
Location: 
Sun Apr 15, 2007 11:03 pm
So good, SO GOOD!!!! The way in which you chose to go about this confrontation was really great. I think that it is a kind of scene that easily could have missed the mark, but you pulled it off splendidly. I think it's good that not all of their issues are resolved, and that Nurael's tears and sense of defeat are appropriate in the context of the rest of your plot -- one of the ways in which this scene could have gone wrong/not been very good was if Haldir had expressed his undying love for Nurael. This would not have been true to the story, as well as rather silly and clichéd. You are doing a wonderful job of drawing out the tension and postponing the resolution. Keep up the excellent work, and please update again soon!
 
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005
Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
Sun Apr 22, 2007 1:18 am
That was beautiful and left me happy and joyful and ....by the way was that the end? I think I will have to keep reading this over and over again. Excellent!!
 
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pib2cheeks
Joined: 19 Jul 2004
Reviews: 23
Location: Ohio
Sat Apr 28, 2007 11:53 am
I LOVE IT! So happy and carefree. I hope that wasn't the end...If not update again soon!
 
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oliwiaroot
Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Reviews: 1
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Mon May 07, 2007 6:37 am
thanks for dedicating this fictioon to me.. Tis a brilliant fic...
Thanks mom xx
 
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griffon
Joined: 14 Jan 2007
Reviews: 6
Location: Normandy
Thu May 24, 2007 2:13 pm
Very sweet, very funny! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story.
 
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PonytailGoddess
Joined: 08 Mar 2007
Reviews: 30
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Thu May 31, 2007 2:05 pm
I loved it! Any chance of a continuation?
 
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