Reviews for "Lost Out Of Time II, : The Coming Together"

Thu Jul 19, 2007 2:46 pm

I love the way you write this story. You make the reader feel involved. As you read you feel like you are journing with them and feeling and doing what they do. As she travels her elven ablilities seems to grow with each passing day, with Gandalfs help. Pretty soon her father will discover her as well as her siblings. Maybe he already feels her? Can't wait for the big *Family Reunion!*
But now I have a delimna: I can't decide which of your stories I like best! This one or *The Golden Lion!*
Ah, What the heck. I like them both.

Sat Aug 04, 2007 8:42 am

thank you!!!!! for a wonderful chapters. sorry i havent been leaving reviews...coz im busy with my new job. but im still reading this wonderful story of yours.... i really love it.....

Mon Aug 06, 2007 12:32 am

Whats that saying *So close, so close but yet so far! Elrond was just a hop and a skip away from Eli but then she hides and puts up her barriers. You have an impressive knowledge from living in the past, like you were living in the pass? I love that. You make the reader a part of the story. It feels so real. Are you sure you are not a reborn,or an elf from the past?!(Hmmm)
Can't wait for the next update.

Sun Aug 12, 2007 5:10 am

I have been enjoying both stories very much about Elrond.

regards

Shetan

Wed Aug 22, 2007 10:58 pm

All I can say is as always can't wait for the next update. Seriously I can't wait. Great story. It has me on the edge.

Thu Aug 30, 2007 2:40 pm

So Ildris knows who Eli's father is huh? And the discription of the new way she was dressed will certainly turn alot of ellon heads. That is if she decided to venture forth outside. And what about Iorlas since he seems to have a liking for her? I can't wait for the next chapter to find out maybe?

Thu Aug 30, 2007 7:08 pm

so close!! ARGH! you do it every chapter. hehe Its so good and so frustrating at the same time.

Can't wait for more. ......PLEASE update soon. Smile smiley face

Mon Sep 17, 2007 11:20 pm

Well Owen seems to be doing pretty good by himself. He has learned much and the ways of living in Middle Earth. If that was me I would need a microwave and A refrigerator. A Tv to watch the news and *Days of our lives* (lol!!) I hope he gets the position he desires. To be a Ranger. I think he can do it. He is pretty much strong in mind, body and spirit. Plus the man can cook!! (Hey Owen you can cook for me anytime!)LOL!

Fri Sep 28, 2007 11:32 pm

Well Owen got what he wished for. To be a Ranger. Lets just hope it won't just be for his cooking skill tho he has already developed a fan club.LOL! But I hope for the best for him and that he doesn't get himself killed in the process. Again your story is makes me feel like I am there. I like the way that the past meets up with the future. Or the way it blends iin so well without being a shocker or culture shock!

Mon Oct 15, 2007 10:36 pm

Beverly, what a cliff hanger you leave us with! UGH! Hopefully we all will not have to wait to long! Great chapter! Love it all!
This is such a great story. I am sure the groups are going to go nuts!
Thank you fro more Elrond! Smile smiley face

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