Reviews for "Lost Out Of Time II, : The Coming Together"

Mon Mar 31, 2008 10:38 pm

you know how to keep your readers on the edge. Always giving just a little bit more but stopping just short of a big event. I'm hooked. You really write so well. I very much look forward to the next chapter.

Tue Apr 08, 2008 7:32 pm

Oh excellent! PLEASE keep updating!!! I really want to read on.............can't wait. Smile smiley face

Mon Apr 21, 2008 10:30 pm

We jumped 4 yrs ahead!!! You missed the mid winter festival, everything seemed to be leading up the the festivities. I find myself wondering what happened with Iorlas and the potential encounter with his uncle and how Eli coped with the very public event.......if she attended at all. Oh well, I guess we will just have to imagine. Regardless of the sudden jump, chapter 33 was just as well written. I like the way you managed to update everyones situation in one chapter, without it seeming rushed. As always, I look ofrward to the next.

Keep writing! Smile smiley face

Mon Jun 09, 2008 7:53 am

Just sending a quick note to say....please don't give up on this fic. Its getting really good and you have many people following it (myself included). Really looking forward to the next update.

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Mon Jun 23, 2008 2:22 pm

What can I say to what I have said in earlier reviews. But please don't make us wait! We needs it precious. We needs more updates we does! Thank you for this beautiful story.

Thu Jul 24, 2008 8:11 am

Wow, I haven't been able to get back on here in ages. What a wonderful surprise to find an update. I'm happy Ari has finally spilled the beans. This chapter was carefully written and really made me feel like I was actually in the room with her. Excellent as usual.

Please update soon. This story is a charm! I smile whenever an update pops up.
I seriously can't wait!!
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Wed Jul 30, 2008 9:59 pm

Oh Boy! The suspense is growing and making edge to the end of my seat. Can't wait for the next (emphasis on can't wait)LOL!

Wed Jul 30, 2008 11:47 pm

Always a pleasure to read your stories! This one is no exception!. Elrond and Erestor think they have the latest plot of a scrupulous villian well thought out - and now have a plan to catch him. I wonder if it will all go as smoothly as they forsee? And how will Eleiann react to the planned public announcement? Can't wait for more!

Tue Aug 05, 2008 1:27 pm

That was beautifull. Words to describe all have left me. Wow! The plot thickens. Will patiently wait for the next chapter. Oh Yes! This and the first one has become one of my favorites and I will have to put both on a cd or print it out so I can read it over and over again when I am offline or on vacation somewhere. Maria.

Thu Sep 04, 2008 12:41 pm

Oh now you've done it. You put a nice little 'kicker' there. Went right back into the future to Eleianns moms cabin where she just so happens to be, with a message from one of the golden wolves. That was so sweet and made me sniff a little as she gazed upon her daughter clearly shown as being accepted as one of Elronds own children. My worry though would be hopefully Saurons minions would not be there to discover without being noticed of the entrance to the time traveling cave, or any other enemies.

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Reviews for "Lost Out Of Time II, : The Coming Together"