Reviews for "Captured Heart"

Tue May 25, 2004 8:54 am

Oh..how I cried when Zinnia told her Ada she was leaving....and when Haldir was talking with Galandriel about it, and Haldir's and Zinnia's resolution,.....and her walking out the gates...Geez! Crying or Very sad smiley face

Shalom~

Tue May 25, 2004 2:18 pm

I almost cried at Zinnia's leaving, but strenth of will saved me Smile smiley face

I can't wait for even more-- please let the next update come soon!!

Tue May 25, 2004 3:43 pm

I found myself holding my breath, waiting for Haldir's reaction. Sheesh you're mean to make us wait till the next part to see how he works through that shock! Wink smiley face

Oh boy, so she got the hardest part over with, telling them about her decision. (Or at least I hope that was the hardest part...) Now, another hard part will be the actual leaving itself. She'll cry some more then, I'm sure. I know I would if I were leaving such a wonderful family as Haldir, Rumil and Orophin. *sigh* Well done! Smile smiley face

Wed May 26, 2004 2:01 am

Bravo! This was the best chapter you have ever written!

Please, keep it up. The story that you created is wonderful. I'm dying to see what is going to happen when Zinnia returns to Lothlórien after her adventures as a ranger. Your decision to leave them as a separated story is very interesting. I'll be waiting for it.

Sat May 29, 2004 5:45 am

Very sweet and well written! Can't wait for her to return home! Very Happy smiley face

Wed Jun 23, 2004 10:33 pm

Oh my, what a way for Haldir to find out his daughter is engaged. LOL Really cute that Megilindir had to eat Rumil's cooking and that Zinnia managed to trick Celeborn into hosting the ceremony. *giggle* I LOVED this! Wonderful! Please don't wait so long to post more? *vbg*

Thu Jun 24, 2004 7:18 am

A cute new chapter - the bargain was hilarious! Anyway - I thought they couldn't be close while "working"? So did that just fall apart? And how will it go now that they're to be married and he's still her commander at "work"?? Anyway, very sweet, though it would be nice to have a chappie or two in between to explain what happened while she was still with the rangers! PLease, please update soon! Very Happy smiley face

Thu Jun 24, 2004 10:56 am

Well, although it came as no surprise, Haldir's reaction, it was still too funny to read. I also cannot believe this is so long. I did not realize that you were up to thirty-five chapters. It does not make me feel so bad about how long mine is. It is a telling point that I am still with you on this. LOOOONNNNGGGG stories tend to intimidate me. I do not feel I have the time to invest, but this one is well worth it. I take back my two Buttershots and give you five. I do agree with Monaleoht though about the filler chapters. It would be interesting to see how the romance developed. And as far as their hands off policy during training, that IS the way a lot of couples meet. If it is inevitable, it is inevitable. It seems it is.

The only thing I can say about the story, technically, is that it could use some commas. It would make it easier to read in places. Other than that, everything else jives. (Sorry, one other has accused me of having a comma fetish.)

Now, I will go pop some corn and wait for more updates. Thank you very much for an enjoyable experience.

Thu Jun 24, 2004 3:06 pm

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Bounce smiley face

IloveitIloveitI-LOVE-IT! *tackleglomp* I can't wait for the next update, may it be snappy Very Happy smiley face

Fri Jun 25, 2004 12:39 am

This is the fluffiest angst, or perhaps the angstiest fluff, I have ever read...and since I usually don't like either genre, I have to say I'm amazed I love *this* story so much--but it's all so adorable! And I'm only 25 chapters in...(read all tonight, though I should probably get some sleep before finishing the story!)

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