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Lelin
Joined: 31 Mar 2004
Reviews: 29
Location: Jerusalem, Israel
Fri May 07, 2004 2:50 pm

Watch your back, Haleth! Witchy-woman's got her sights on yon elf!

More greatness... Smile smiley face

Lelin
 
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Radbooks

Joined: 29 Apr 2004
Reviews: 66
Location: Washington State
Sat May 08, 2004 12:20 am

I just found this story this evening and I had to stay up and read it all! It is wonderful! Razz smiley face I can't wait for them to open up to each but it's fun to see them struggle through with their emotions. That sneaky snake of a woman, I hope Inglor is careful - but he is not dumb so he'll be okay. Anyway, thanks for a fun story.

RADbooks
 
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ElenaTiriel

Joined: 17 Mar 2004
Reviews: 132
Location: The Grey Havens
Sat May 08, 2004 4:19 pm

Just wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying this story greatly. Inglor and Haleth are so unlike each other in some ways, but so alike in their stubbornness and fear of disclosing their feelings!

I'm rooting for this story to continue for many, many more chapters! (Any sequels planned?)

Thank you for sharing your considerable talent with us!
 
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Lelin
Joined: 31 Mar 2004
Reviews: 29
Location: Jerusalem, Israel
Sun May 09, 2004 11:25 am

Awwww! Such a nice elfy. I'm jealous of Haleth! Smile smiley face And admire her, too.

But who really did set that fire? The suspense is terrible!

Lelin
 
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AzureDragoness

Joined: 11 Jan 2004
Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
Sun May 09, 2004 10:18 pm

Yeeeeeeee! Poor Haleth, left in the hold..... wah. Anyways, I love it! More, pwease?
 
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AzureDragoness

Joined: 11 Jan 2004
Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
Tue May 11, 2004 5:07 pm

Oooooh, that little.... gragh! LEAVE INGLOR ALONE! *tackles the evil biotch*

Loveloveloveit! More, please!
 
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Lelin
Joined: 31 Mar 2004
Reviews: 29
Location: Jerusalem, Israel
Wed May 12, 2004 4:07 am

The plot extremely thickens! I'm so proud of Haleth - others would have freaked out in the hold. And I'm sure that conniving witch won't get her talons in our favorite elf.

So enjoyable! Smile smiley face

Lelin
 
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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
Thu May 13, 2004 8:36 am

:Takes a huge beiseboll stick and gets ready to smack evil bitch's noise so she will not be so pretty and no-one will be led in merry-go-rounds by her:
The whole story is fab. At some point I was still keeping tracks of things I wanted to comment on, but they got too many. I love the way Inglor is so clueless and chivalrous, that he does not pull ranks or treat Haleth as less even if he is superior (and she feels it, but is to comfy around him to speak her mind and even show some of her not-so-pretty side)
Lol for the rocking bed in Bree, Inglor SO clueless.
Consider yourself in possession of one more fan.
 
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Havetoist

Joined: 14 Apr 2004
Reviews: 29
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Thu May 13, 2004 8:25 pm

Haleth - chapter 38 - brilliant!!!
 
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AzureDragoness

Joined: 11 Jan 2004
Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
Thu May 13, 2004 8:41 pm

Oh dear. Something tells me there's going to be much Inglor-heroics involved, and more dodging the evil biotch.
Mooooooooooore! Soon smiley face
 
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