Reviews for "Pitfalls of the Palantir"

Mon Aug 02, 2004 11:48 am

I'm hoping this means a sequel is on the way? I truly love this story...

Tue Aug 03, 2004 9:00 am

*howls with laughter* Our favorite walrus is back! Lordy, there's ANOTHER mega "clam"? *grins* I don't care if it's the epilogue, there better be some more after this! *stern look* I mean it Twisted Evil smiley face

Well, later *flutters off*

Fri Aug 13, 2004 5:08 pm

One of the best stories, in many fandoms I have read, with original characters. Most plausible.
I really like both of them. I just wish You would delve more deeper into Inglor's feelings about her.

I liked the final scene with Palandir.
I hope that You'll fruitfully continue exploring them and their world.
And that we will found out more about his reasons for following Haleth and have a chance to see how their relationship develops.

Thu Sep 02, 2004 6:10 pm

What? That's it? WHY??? Come on! Please! There's such tension between Inglor and Haleth, well maybe more on Haleth's side, perhaps, but It's obvious that Inglor has a strong affection for her as well! But, then I may be mistaking your writing of his affection as something romantic when maybe you intended his feelings for her to be that of a sort of mentor or something, that he perhaps saw her as a child, him being so old and her being preety much a child compared to his immortal years. But, if it was romantic interest on his part please don't stop there! I beg of you! I think it would add so much more to Inglor's already delightful character and add further depth.

Ciao!

Fri Sep 03, 2004 12:48 am

T'Ang?! Ha! Ha! That's so clever of you! Hee, hee! "T'Ang: it's a kick in a flask!" Very Happy smiley face

Ciao!

Sun Nov 07, 2004 5:29 pm

Oh, this is a magnificent story. I had felt compelled to review earlier, but I had desperately wanted to continue reading, so I resolved to review at the end. I'm glad I did. If I had reviewed earlier, I would have been going on about how funny it was, and it is hilarious, but it is so much more. I have never read such a compelling fanfiction with original characters as the the main protagonists. The plot was simple enough, but the characters are complex and interesting, and I can't get enought of them. The humor was very well done and I just want to print this story out and have it bound so I can read it on the subway. It's brilliant. Really, you should change the place names and titles and just sell this as an original story. I would buy it. My only nitpick is as a Lord of the Rings fanfiction, King Elessar was consistently referred to as King Estel. That is incorrect, because Estel was the name he was called as a child and teenager until Elrond told him of his heritage and his true name. After he became king he was referred to in records as Elessar Telcontar and King Elessar in person. I don't know if the name Estel was known to others outside of his family and anyone else who might have known him at a young age, but it seems unlikely that people would be calling him 'King Estel' to me. If there is an explanation, feel free to tell me. Anyway, that is a very minor detail. It did not detract from the story at all, it is still one of my favorites. And the ending was great too. Good job. I hope to see more from you in the future.

Wed Dec 29, 2004 10:09 pm

"Inglor," she said calmly, "Look up there."

Bwahaha! And the POV character in chapter 1 was a fabulous way to introduce the quirky, creature-ful feel of the piece. Love it!

On a way side note, you might want to remove some of those thank-you notes from the summary. Just the one-liner is enough to hook readers. The rest of it might be better placed in an AN before the first chapter. Smile smiley face

Thu Apr 14, 2005 4:13 pm

Oh wow

I had not expected a story with two OC's as the leads to be this interesting. The plot is wonderful and captivating and the relationship of Inglor and Haleth even better. I like how you put the clues and little information at a time about their pasts. I'd love to read more about those two even if you don't intend to put them together in the end.
You are a very talented writer. Smile smiley face

Sun Sep 18, 2005 3:02 am

I wanted to read this to review you for MEFAs and I just now started hoping I could get most of it read in time.

I knew your writing was good from other stories but so far this is really incredible. Its such an easy read and considering its 4am, it would be so easy to put me to sleep right now. Its very entertaining and I love the Walrus. And her tying him down. Then the rodents running over him - your description of their actions was hysterical. Very Happy smiley face

This will be easy to read in the time I have left - its a great read!

Sat Jul 08, 2006 1:52 pm

This story is spectacular. I love the portrayl of Inglor. It's exactly how I picture elves to be. I wish there was a sequel. I would love to read more about these two characters. They set each other off so well.

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