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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Thu Jun 24, 2004 3:22 pm
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A great new chapter! You may want to skip a little time...if recovery takes so long! lol. Also- elves don't require sleep, they just like the dreamst they have. Please,please update  with a wonderful new chapter!  |
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aimless
Joined: 05 Feb 2004
Reviews: 36
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Thu Jun 24, 2004 8:01 pm
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Thank you for all the great reviews everyone. I appreciate them all. I know I have thrown canon merrily out the window but that is the fun of writing a fic, bending the world a bit to fit our conceptions of it. I like the idea of elves needing rest. I believe them to be much more resiliant than humans but still have the same basic needs. Such as food, water, sleep, etc, etc. Especially if one is weary from days of no rest and worry. I like to think of them as higher than mere mortals yes, but with the same foibles , fears and desires. If they were too perfect it would be no fun to write about them. I feel that Dara's recovery or not is an integral part of the story and needed to introduce a rival. I will try and not draw it out too much or go into extreme amounts of needless details. In my mind the path to love, at least in this fic, is not a boom overnight they are in love for all eternity type of thing. I love you all and are gratified that you are taking the time to read. Keep the comments coming I love them even if you have a criticism. Constructive criticism makes me a better writer.
Hugs
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annas
Joined: 13 Jun 2004
Reviews: 17
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Sun Jun 27, 2004 3:53 pm
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| I agree, maybe skip a bit of time, but still give us lots of good Rumil/Dara moments. Please update again soon. |
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Wed Jul 14, 2004 7:35 pm
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| We've been waiting forever! *sighs* Please, please update !! |
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Talasi
Joined: 29 Mar 2004
Reviews: 116
Location: Haldir\'s Lap
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Mon Aug 02, 2004 5:19 pm
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I am really enjoying this story. Dara and Rumil are both so stubborn! I love how Haldir stepped in to make his little bro get healing and rest. Those 2 are just perfect for each other. This side of Rumil is just so sweet, and of course his reactions to her state of undress were cute too. I look forward to more as soon as possible.
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Dazzler420
Joined: 30 Jan 2004
Reviews: 20
Location: Katy, Texas
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Tue Aug 03, 2004 10:32 pm
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Great chapter!!!   |
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annas
Joined: 13 Jun 2004
Reviews: 17
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Sat Aug 07, 2004 8:14 am
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I had such high hopes for these 2 after last chapter, but hmm, maybe Dara will start realizing her feelings for Rumil while he's away, though he should have said goodbye.
you're doing a great job, more updates soon!! |
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annas
Joined: 13 Jun 2004
Reviews: 17
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Fri Aug 20, 2004 1:44 pm
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Terrific! they kissed! So exciting, I can't wait to see what happens next, how both will react during the aftermath.
Not liking the new character.
More soon please! |
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eldawisdom
Joined: 31 Aug 2004
Reviews: 1
Location: Texas
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Mon Aug 30, 2004 7:35 pm
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This is such a great story. Please post more soon. This story is killing me or maybe its Dara that is killing me. I feel so terrible for Rumil but I am glad that he made Dara aware of his feelings. For someone she considers such a good friend, she has not treated him well at all. Will her wounds heal so she can continue as a warden? Will she accept Rumil's love? If not, will Rumil survive it or fade? Will she stop being a self-centered brat? You have a lot to answer in the next chapters, so get on it! 
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annas
Joined: 13 Jun 2004
Reviews: 17
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Fri Oct 15, 2004 5:47 pm
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| update? please? I'm missing this one! |
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