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maddie
Joined: 08 May 2004
Reviews: 9
Location: Australia
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Tue Jul 27, 2004 7:15 am
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Hi,
I have only just started reading this story but am really enjoying it.
I love Ela. I look forward to reading more of this .
I am hooked now 
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Rous
Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Mon Aug 23, 2004 10:46 pm
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I have typos?????? I will have to fire my spell check. Of course I want to know about them. You do not realize how anal about them I am. However, if it concerns possible alternate spellings, (UK version verses US version), just save it and read my intro. If it really is a typo, then by all means, BRING IT ON! (Sorry, could not resist). I am happy you changed your mind about the pace. I will update, though. We have been on vacation; two weeks without internet access. I thought I would die. So did the Dude, according to the snide remarks he made everytime I mentioned e-mailing someone. Anyway, updates soon. As for Havetoist, yes, she is a doll. I did not realize that I was on anyone's list. But I am glad you like it. Keep reading.
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HisieLome
Joined: 17 Jan 2004
Reviews: 133
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Sat Aug 28, 2004 7:27 pm
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| I look forward to the name being unlocked. The future seems like it will be fun to watch. |
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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004
Reviews: 73
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Thu Sep 02, 2004 9:45 pm
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Hi Rous,
wow this is a little more detailed than the orginal,kinda like it, what happen now   :
isn't funny how we can take lifes stories and use them in our own? it it works well.sometime we can even learn a lesson from them.
ok you got me hooked AGIN  whens the next chapter??Please update  |
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Rous
Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Thu Sep 02, 2004 10:31 pm
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Tesseleve said
> Hi Rous,
> wow this is a little more detailed than the orginal,kinda like it, what happen now :
> isn't funny how we can take lifes stories and use them in our own? it it works well.sometime we can even learn a lesson from them.
> ok you got me hooked AGIN whens the next chapter??Please update
Do not tell me you found the original? Where? I knew I should have burned it. LOL. Unlike some, I am not inordinately proud of my first attempt. It is crude, unpolished and shows an appalling ignornance of the facts and lore of LOTR. I hope my work shows improvement and maturity. I have worked very hard on improving my writing, but then, that is the purpose to writing. Thank you. |
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lucylambchops
Joined: 11 Sep 2004
Reviews: 8
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Fri Sep 17, 2004 4:37 pm
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| Ahhh...fantastic! |
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amcmary
Joined: 13 Oct 2004
Reviews: 4
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Tue Oct 12, 2004 11:30 pm
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| This story is great! Keep it up. Please update soon |
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kinvara
Joined: 18 Feb 2004
Reviews: 58
Location: middle of nowhere, dorset
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Wed Oct 20, 2004 12:00 pm
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Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh, what's going to happen next, I HATE being left like this, so like many other reviews this is a little hint, please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please (ok i know i went a little ott but there you go!) can you up date soon  BTW its a great story, i don't know if i have actually told you that and you are a very good writer! Keep going! |
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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004
Reviews: 73
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Wed Nov 03, 2004 1:47 am
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ooh rous burn the oringial , come now Rous give your self a litte more creited.
i liked the orginal, ithought it was very good for a first timer
it not easy to write story you have in you head and put them in paper,
now, on this story i love the detailing on it ,like when she start given poor Estr. a headace just by having a coversation with her, bye the time it was over he didnt know what coversation he was on and witch way is up,talk about making a man dizzy 
i think this story is also very good and since it is more detailed than the last one . does thst mean there ,uhum itiment part is going to be more detialed,got me wondering
well in all very good story well witten the both of them
PLEASE UPTATE SOON
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ghettoelleth
Joined: 06 Nov 2004
Reviews: 378
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Mon Nov 08, 2004 6:17 pm
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I found this lovely little story and read it straight through. When I got to the last update my screams disturbed the slumber of Tolkien himself. Please update soon. (Swithces tactics hoping to coax her even more.) As I was reading, my eleven year old daughter stood behind me reading over my shoulder and was hooked after one page. She's making me print it chapter for chapter for her. She's a small child Rous, please understand that when she gets to chapter 12 she, much like Ela will be driving me insane, peppering me with question about what will happen and when the next chapter will come. I intend to transcibe word for word her tirade and e-mail it to you so you can share in my joy. Poor child *sniff sniff*
On a serious note, this is the lovliest story and I adore the "day to day" as much as the intrigue, keep up the good work..........faster..........please. |
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