Reviews for "Butterfly-Cocoon"

Wed Mar 16, 2005 9:50 am

It's been a wonderful fic I believe many (and that is an understatement in itself) have enjoyed.

You created a highly complicated person (Ela) who is quite a brilliant and intriguing character which enthralled me from the start. You wove her to the point that I believe that such a person is real. In truth, Ela was also an inspiration for myself, who wishes that I am more like her in many ways.

I guess, in doubt, one finds the greatest gems. Smile smiley face

Tue Mar 22, 2005 5:43 am

Nooooooooooooooooooo i can't explain in words how frustrated i am that this is the end! And the thing is you manage to give us an idea of what is going to happen but not all of it- this probably why it is called a cliff hanger! Your writing is brilliant- i love reading but it takes alot to actually get me engrossed and feel like i'm there as a character and you manage to do this which is fantastic! Good Luck with the other story, but please don't take too long... I shall be waiting for the next part Very Happy smiley face

Tue Mar 22, 2005 10:59 am

I really loved your story and i hope Part Two is in the makings. I wonder if she will end up meeting Estel in Rivendell, Ela I mean. Please write more soon I love it

Tue Mar 22, 2005 7:39 pm

Thank you, everyone that I did not thank with a PM. And Ranger, Part ll is already started. I have about three chapters. Just waiting for a beta to jump out and bite me. Seriously, it is going well. As to her meeting Estel, maybe when he is a child, but not until years later for sure, in Lórien. Maybe not until the Fellowship shows up. I actually have Part three of the original and will intertwine the two together. It is long after 'you know what' happens. That is all I will say. I am glad you are enjoying it. I love writing it.

Thu Mar 31, 2005 11:38 pm

Just an update if you are following this story. Part ll Chapter one had been posted. I wanted to post it first to my site, so it is there for a while, then I will post it here.

You can find it here:

http://www.freewebs.com/rous3/abutterflyeffect.htm

Fri Apr 01, 2005 3:28 am

Heyyyy whats the big idea leving me haning. Wink smiley face

ok this was a very goood chapter,sooo when the next one???? Head bang smiley face

PLease Update Soon smiley face

!!
Tess

Mon Jul 11, 2005 11:23 am

OK, you've hooked me. I surrender. After reading one of your other pieces, I went looking to see what else you'd written. I didn't want to get caught up in this saga. It's really long, and I try to stick to the shorter ones. but I opened it out of curiosity and was hooked. And I can't even regret it! This is great! Your characters are well written and wonderfully developed. Ela is delightfully complex. The situations are intriguingly unique, and the creation of the Indrel peoples and culture was a wonderful idea. Your whole concept is stunning in it's entirety. I'm loving this story. Gotta run and check out Part II now!

Tue Sep 06, 2005 2:34 pm

I found this story yesterday and finished it today. Thank you so much for a wonderful, entrancing story. I am off to find the sequel now. You have a fan.

Sat Jan 28, 2006 11:30 pm

I have read through chapter ten. I would read it all tonight, but my husband is getting anxious for my company, as it is 11:30 pm here. So far, I love it, but I do have some notes I wopuld like to write.
In chapter 2 it says in one sentence that she is ten. In the next, it says six. Is this a typo? Also, the story is good, but confusing as hell up to this point.
Chapter 4: I can only just imagine Haldir singing lullabyes. And cute orcs? How picturesque! I have noticed throughout this chapter that sell (a nickname, I believe) has become Iell. Is there a reason behind this? Caldelen is definitely a cad, and I do not mean of the computer assisted drafting program, either.
You drop hints all throughout the story so casually. I like that in a story. It is a good hook. You also have such tactfully written insults. I really enjoyed them all.
Chapter six had the hideous ending of They're Dying! I loved it.
In chapter 7, I have realized that men always go for the unattainable. Is it a game with them? Also, I belive I have found a typo: When Ela is meeting Mares, she says "Lady is for someone who DOES inhabit treehouses..." I am thinking it was supposed to be doesn't.

All in all, up to chapter ten it is awesome. If all your stories are like this, I would love to beta for you if you are ever in the market for one.

Wed Jan 23, 2008 6:20 pm

I really like this story! I hope you will write many more in the future!
xxx
Ela-addict Wink smiley face

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