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The Forsaken (NC-17)
by Shanastay.
Chapters [9]
Reviews [ 8] Warnings [Explicit sexual content and violence]
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Sat May 15, 2004 4:02 am
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OK. I have been following this on aff, but I noticed there are no reviews here yet. This is absolutely a wonderful story!!! One of the best.
*Bows to the masta* This story is gaining immense depth. Your descrpitions of the network and explanations of where they have all been over time is great! It is wonderful how you are tying several of the stories together as well. I am so proud to have been part of this plot bunny.
AWWWW Poor E. Another wonderful chapter to a very promising story. It is wonderful to see this nurturing side of Shar and Haldir. E definitely went to the right place!!
Sam cracks me up. ADHD posterchild was precious. That "Who the hell are you" comment was so appropriate for her. She privdes the perfect amoutn of comic relief to this situation...ligthens things up a bit.
This story has amazing potential at the hands of such a gifted writer. I really enjoy all of your stories immensely. They are helping me through a lot of issues we have in common.
Poor E. Who could do such a thing? *cleans gun and looks around for sharp objects* Fear not people....We will be exacting revenge on his behalf. You know that, right? This was a painful chapter to read, but absolutely necessary to the story to understand what horrors he was subjected to.
In spite of the heat here in AZ, I now have goosebumps nearly head to toe after reading the second half of Torment in its entirety. It gives me the much-needed resolve to survive the next few months here. I could not have put this into words any better myself. Beautifully written. Perfect lyrics....as always. My nerves of steel, spine of Jell-O self is waiting not-so patiently to make my exit and.....believe me when I say that likely this song will be blaring on my stereo on repeat when I do leave.
MUSH WARNING: I thank you for being a friend and listening through all this crap. Its good to see it inspire such a wonderful story with enormous potential for offshoots. The lyrics you suggest are, as usual, right on the money!!!!
I seriously cannot wait until the next update! You are foretelling my future, so to speak.
You have such a way with words, it leaves me speachless. I rely on you to be my voice. I follow this story with eager anticipation.
Great face off with Shar and Janessa. Sam's character brings another interesting dimension to the story as well. (E forgives Sam for the bum comment.)
Tia - Tal |
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For Thine is the Glory (NC-17)
by Shanastay.
Chapters [4]
Reviews [ 14] Warnings [some violence and explicit sexual content]
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Sat May 15, 2004 3:42 am
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This looks to an absolutely fascinating turn in Janessa's story. Just love Glory's reactions. The twins were great too. *snorts* ....and some people think we are silly for learning a little Sindarin. *snorts* Your descriptions are great! I can picture everything perfectly, from facial reactions to physical combat stances and running through the trees! Their face off was interesting. The falling at the beginning was so strikingly calm and fit the song perfectly. She should have known better than to take off.....but again, that is Janessa, so it was perfect. Her tears were well placed as well. She has been through absolute hell and now everything is upside down all over again.
Definitely not a Mary Sue. I was surprised she tried to take off, but that is typical Janessa. Spunky spitfire. Glory's male reactions to her and his surprise to them are also most amusing. *giggles and points at Glory*
ROFLMAO ----------- bite me. Seriously....I was laughing out loud and scared E. Now he is on the floor laughing. That is SO YOU!! *joins E on the floor*
Neverfear Janessa.....sexy elflords in abundance. This is a good thing...promise.
Talasi
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Mairen - A Life Once Lost (R)
by Fianna.
Chapters [17]
Reviews [ 38] Warnings [Violence/]
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Tue May 04, 2004 7:55 pm
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Fianna,
Everything you write is so wonderful! The depth of your stories is astounding and absolutely worthy of Tolkien's amazing characters. I see now why the Valar have brought her back in the body of a human. Her prior distate for humans and refusal to be compassionate to them was her undoing. I understand Mairen's anxiety to keep her own identity. I think the eventual outcome will be a wise and compassionate warrior who is now worthy of Haldir's attention. I really liked that Haldir helped the humans and corrected her on that issue.
The worry stone as a link to Celeborn is a fascinating idea as well. You have very skillfully conveyed her anxiety, the extent of her weariness, and fear of what she cannot control. Her dislike for the she elf is also a great twist!
This was a very exciting chapter at the end. The battle was very realistic...especially her self harm to avoid the darkness while trying to fight off those horrid Orcs. I really hope her brothers are well.
The saying at the end about her being in the best of hands was just PERFECT! How true. I can't imaging better hands to be in. *sigh*
Please update soon. I am enthralled with this story...actually all of your stories. You have tremendous talent and I look forward to your future projects as well.
Talasi
Haldir Worshiper, Wanton Elfbanger, and Keeper of Erestor's Heart |
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Heart of a Warden (PG-13)
by aimless.
Chapters [16]
Reviews [ 55] Warnings [some violence, some graphic description]
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Thu Apr 29, 2004 2:16 pm
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I'm so happy her fever has broken. That outrider had better show up soon! I can't believe Rumil doesn't realize he is in love. I can't wait to see if the feelings are returned.
Update soon!
Talasi |
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The Phoenix's Griffin (NC-17)
by Havetoist.
Chapters [23]
Reviews [ 21] Warnings [Sex, war violence, language]
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Wed Apr 21, 2004 8:20 pm
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Will you be posting Amaras and Phaila on this site as well? I am a devote Haldir worshiper, but the story of Amaras and Phaila is so intriguing!
I am re-reading this story. It is most excellent! I read it before on aff, but never got to finish it. Wonderful characters. The history of the Morrigan is very good.
Talasi |
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Comfort (NC-17)
by Ellbee.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 16] Warnings [smut]
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Tue Apr 20, 2004 6:11 pm
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WOW!! I am reduced to a pile of goo. *fans self* This was amazing. Your descriptions are absolutely breathtaking. I am still recuperating. I can't get over how well you portrayed the feelings and raw physical need, making it beautiful with mind-numbing intensity. Please write more!!!
Talasi
Haldir Worshiper and Wanton Elfbanger |
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Heart of a Warden (PG-13)
by aimless.
Chapters [16]
Reviews [ 55] Warnings [some violence, some graphic description]
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Tue Apr 20, 2004 5:28 pm
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Off to a wonderful start! He is so confused. he he Please write more.
Talasi
Resident Haldir Worshiper and Wanton Elfbanger |
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Haldir and the child (R)
by SilentTears.
Chapters [4]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [Death]
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Tue Apr 13, 2004 3:27 am
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Very intriguing. I have been watching this story on AFF. Please update!!
Talasi |
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