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Reviews by GoAwayLemebe

StoryReview
A Little Night Music (NC-17)
by Ariel.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [10]
Warnings [Graphic Sex]
Mon Apr 19, 2004 11:41 am

What a lovely piece. Well written, very well thought out. I very much imagine Sam being like this with his Rosie. Not many delve into the family life after marriage. But this is truly beautiful.
 
 
The Empty Vessel (NC-17)
by ZeeDrippyVessel.

Chapters [31]
Reviews [64]
Warnings [Most canon whores consider this NOT LaCE friendly]
Sat Apr 17, 2004 12:44 pm

The paper you have cost me.

Are you published? You should be. This is a tour de force, a most spectacular work. It is epic in proportions and you have used your talents wisely. Thank you for obviously delving into the qppendixes and remaining fairly true to canon.

I however, find myself in the unusual position of defending the deviation of canon; specifically, the sex lives of the Elves, but in all honestly, I want to very much agree with you. Regardless, I do not think it detracts.

To give a face and a voice to JRRT's muse is mind-boggling. While I would suspect you have taken some drumming for it, I am glad to see it has not surfaced here and I applaud you for your vision.

Now, onward to this sequel...
 
 
Little Elfling Lost (PG-13)
by sheraiah.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [6]
Warnings [Graphic description of the aftermath of a massacre]
Tue Apr 06, 2004 11:07 am

Beautifully written. I enjoy seeing Thranduil written as a loving father. We all know he could a real bastard, but this puts a lovely spin on him.
 
 
Spiders, Wargs, and Wights! (G)
by sheraiah.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Warnings [None, really]
Tue Apr 06, 2004 11:05 am

Very very cute.
 
 
Elanor's Revenge (R)
by Julie.

Chapters [37]
Reviews [216]
Tue Apr 06, 2004 10:48 am

I stumbled on this (actually, this entire archive) quite by accident and have been amazed at the wide range of fiction to be found. There is bad, there is boring, there is wild romping, and there is the skillfully, delightully done.

This ladies, is the later.

Despite the most curious beginnings, and my dire prayer, oh please do not be a "female tromps all over noble warden of the woods and he turns into a total wimp bag" story , this has turned into a wonderfully romantic tale.

Yes, there IS a place for romance. A very important place. And the genre is not one to be frowned upon or treated lightly.

You have woven a heady tale of wonderful light pastels that are soothing to the eye and pleasing to the pallate. That Elanor will snare the arrogant Haldir, I have no doubt. That Haldir will teach her of all things sensual and sexy, I have no doubt. But in the meantime, I wait each update, to watch the dance.
 
 
Use me once (NC-17)
by ZeeDrippyVessel.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [16]
Tue Apr 06, 2004 10:35 am

A very lovely romp.

Am most glad you took this into the Empty Vessel and resolved the "canon" issue. Otherwise, I would have to scream.

You have a lovely, lilting style and the ability to paint pictures with words in a way most do not.
 
 
When She Loved Me (PG)
by CinnamonGrrl.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [8]
Fri Apr 02, 2004 4:08 pm

Well written but, how can I say this without being misconstrued? Surprised smiley faceops:

It was well written, but it seemed very textbook. I did not get a sense of Orophin's wilting or a reason to why he continued to love her even after she left. If this is your first time writing, you did well. Just need to work on infusing your text with emotional content.