Reviews by Vendie

Preparing The Way · Tue Oct 02, 2007 9:17 pm

I was nearly in tears when I finished this. You have written a wonderful story - touching and beautiful. Thanks for sharing!

The Trees Remember · Sun Feb 18, 2007 7:20 pm

... ... OH MY GOD!! You might not remember me, in fact, I'm counting on it, but I remember reading this story when it was brand new and I am SO thrilled with the way it ended. Your knowlege of history and Tolkien's writings is positively AMAZING and makes the story pop to life in ways that a lot of fanfiction can't. I am absolutely in awe and am glad to say that when I started reading where I left off last, I coudln't move until I finished. Great job. Never stop writing - even if it's only for yourself because you have a wonderful gift. Never loose it.

Adar & Ion: Moments · Fri Aug 11, 2006 4:14 am

That was absolutely adorable. It's very dialogue-heavy, which is a good thing in some ways, but it would have been nice to get inside Legolas' and Thranduil's heads a little. Otherwise, this story was just wonderful. Thanks for sharing it! Very Happy smiley face

The Trees Remember · Sat Mar 12, 2005 2:57 pm

DAMMIT! Why did you have to stop there?! T_T I'm on the edge of my seat for the next chapter!

Your descriptions of the landscape and the what happened to Elaneth were so real that I could *see* them happening. It was amazing. I really can't wait for the next chapter. Great writing, as always Very Happy smiley face

The Trees Remember · Sat Mar 05, 2005 12:59 pm

This is AMAZING! I feel rather badly about not coming back and reading whenever you updated, because I've clearly been missing out! I like how the story has progressed - it's only gotten better since I last read it Very Happy smiley face

You truly are a talented writer and I can't wait to read more of this!

A Shadow and a Thought · Thu Jan 06, 2005 4:44 pm

I enjoyed this, there were a lot of emotions weaved into the story and that made the words hit close to the heart. I love reading stories like that Very Happy smiley face

There are a few technical things I noticed, however. For some reason, instead of your quotes looking like this: "Quote", they look like this: ,,Quote". You might want to look into that. Oh, and Denethor was the *Steward* of Gondor. Not Stewart Wink smiley face

Otherwise, this was a great story. I loved it Smile smiley face

"Mysterious Fate" · Wed Jan 05, 2005 12:58 am

*sigh* Yet another wonderful chapter that decidedly did not last long enough! Your ability to describe exactly what's going on is amazing. I love it.
There were a couple of technical errors, however. The plural form of Palantir is Palantiri, and it is more appealing to the eye when you write out a number instead of using the number itself (ten as opposed to 10.).
Other than that, this last chapter is wonderful. As I said, you have a knack for describing scenery wonderfully and you totally have me hooked. I can't wait for the next chapter, as always. Great job!

The Trees Remember · Wed Dec 29, 2004 11:54 am

Extremely interesting! You had me hooked from the first sentence. I loved the scene between Elladan, Elrohir, and Elrond - it was priceless. And you did a wonderful job with describing the modern world as the elves see it. Haldir's comment about the rain being tainted really made a big impact...
This is so good it's hard to describe exactly what I liked about it. I like it all! I can't wait to read more! Very Happy smiley face

A Yuletide Carol · Fri Dec 24, 2004 6:15 pm

That was adorable and extremely clever! I loved it! When you mentioned Santa as an elf, I imagined Legolas wearing a santa outfit - it caused quite a bit of giggling on my part. X3

Merethesgal (A Masquerade) · Wed Dec 22, 2004 5:50 pm

I really enjoyed this. You used wonderful imagery throughout the entire story, and you were very descriptive *ahem* Wink smiley face

I also liked the dialogue. Great read! Very Happy smiley face

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