Reviews by Vendie

Where Are You Going? · Sun Jul 18, 2004 10:31 pm

Very beautiful. I loved it. :3

"Mysterious Fate" · Sun Jul 18, 2004 8:44 pm

I have to admit, when I first saw the summary for this story I was rather skeptical, but you have such a command of the language that it made the tenth-walker-plot easy to swallow. You did a wonderful job making sure that you got all of the characters covered and you took an omniscient point of view rather than a third person with your OC as the main character. I enjoy reading what everyone's thinking.

Though, you may want to check over a few technical things in the story, such as Galadriel giving Frodo the light of Earendil - not Elendil. And one grammar thing that I noticed was that you used numbers rather than writing them out (ie, 22 instead of twenty-two).

Otherwise, the story was great. Especially the scenes between Legolas and Kaitlyn. I felt like I was going to melt. You're doing a great job! I can't wait to read more. Keep it up! Very Happy smiley face

I Can Feel It! · Mon Jul 12, 2004 10:45 am

Very interesting! I can't wait to read more.

The Sea Calls Us Home · Wed Jun 09, 2004 5:52 pm

Another wonderful story! I can't wait to read the rest! Very Happy smiley face

Captain of the Guard · Mon May 31, 2004 1:56 pm

I really enjoyed reading this. You captured the characters quite well. Keep it up! Very Happy smiley face

Over Fen and Field · Sun May 30, 2004 4:37 pm

Very well written! You did a wonderful job of capturing the characters. I thouroughly enjoyed reading it. Smile smiley face

I'm looking forward to more of your stories!

Return to Valinor · Sat May 01, 2004 4:40 pm

I love this story! I've been reading it for a while and I can't wait to read the next chapter!

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