Reviews by miriel361

Don't Panic! · Sun Mar 28, 2004 9:04 am

boz4PM said
> I am a little confused. The last chapter was chapter 23 and I cannot find me mistaking 'mireth' for 'miriel'. Would you mind telling me where it is so I can correct it? Thanks. Smile smiley face

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> And thank you for being flattered! Very Happy smiley face

Sorry I can't find it again now. Maybe I even imagined it!lol

Beyond Adversity · Wed Mar 17, 2004 2:55 pm

At last - a new story for me to chew over when I am running.

Morgul, The Loan Shark · Wed Mar 10, 2004 4:24 pm

Very funny, I can see why we are in the same family....

Put all the funny ones in the place with Flower Power.

Breath of Life · Wed Mar 10, 2004 1:00 pm

I enjoyed this very much. A lovely scenario. You thought out the plot well. There were just a couple of problems with your tenses - shall write to you over the message function.

Of Legolas and Luthien · Tue Mar 09, 2004 1:31 pm

Amelie. How wonderful to find this story here. It's not often that I am lost for words, but with this story you have managed to weave a magical spell that has silenced me. It is fabulous. May I ask you to update soon?

Don't Panic! · Tue Mar 09, 2004 11:08 am

Was it intentional that I made an appearance in your last chapter? I think it was supposed to be her friend, but I'm flattered anyway.

Forgotten Allies · Mon Mar 01, 2004 1:38 pm

I too would like to say how much I enjoyed this. It was a pleasure to read and I am so glad that you didn't fall to the temptation of letting Legolas stay.

I enjoyed the character of Elrond very much. I also loved your characterisation of Elrohir and could just imagine him in a kilt. lol You shocked me a bit with the cutting off of ears. Poor Elrohir.

One of the things that made me laugh was the fact that the grandfather was called Alistair. In my modern day story (Elrohir's Tale) I also had the male descendent of Aragorn called Alistair. I guess it's because it begins with 'A' and doesn't sound drippy.

Would little Colin be a half- elf or a human I wonder?

And yes if I hadn't already written an elf-in-this-world- story, I would feel inspired to go out and write one. Thank you for providing me with a lovely story to read.

Don't Panic! · Thu Feb 26, 2004 12:33 pm

Well I was a bit disappointed about the barechested elves washing their smalls. I was hoping for naked elves bathing and sunning themselves on the rocks....... Still didn't stop me from laughing my head off and shrieking, yes SHRIEKING and jumping around. How embarassing. Also the idea of a naked Lindir lying on the banks of the river just waiting to be discovered....

Not to mention Boromir thinking she likes him! Lol and what she's not a virgin and the elves have picked that up. wow! That got them thinking didn't it!

Like Mora I'm wondering if there is going to be a plot line which explains her appearance in Middle Earth. But would also be 100% content if you just continue with describing everyday life at Imladris. You do it so well. Is there going to be a confrontation with Boromir? Is there going to be a festival where they all get drunk? Spring cleaning?

And a question to your readers: Okay who would have stayed and stared at the elves for a bit? Me! me! Oh yes!

Don't Panic! · Mon Feb 16, 2004 5:17 am

Oh and eating testicles was brilliant...... they also ate udder! ahem.

Don't Panic! · Mon Feb 16, 2004 5:16 am

All I can say is that this is hilarious. Very much what I would expect if you were really lost in ME. I'm so glad that you took up the issue of language. It was an issue that I was never brave enough to attempt (perhaps because 2nd language teaching is my field), but you have mastered it wonderfully. If you're wanting any hints there in the language learning process please ask. For instance now she knows a few nouns, her brain will now be looking for a simple negative. Then she will have sentences like 'tree not'. And she will need a few verbs.....)

I'm also happy to see that you have included periods and underwear, oh and toothbrushes ( I do believe salt rinses were also used - also salt would have been a very expensive commodity - even in the roman times, people were paid in salt - i.e. to be worth your salt). Everything you have written is very believable, the only time I thought 'no - not really' was the barmaid giving away her dress in Bree. Hell she probably only got one new dress a year, and if the dress was really worn, then it would have been cut down and used for something else. In the end, it would have been used for cleaning rags or for making a quilt.....

Hm, this sounds a little negative - but no far from it, I was jumping around and laughing and talking to my computer and wondering what would come next.

Wonderful, your newly devoted fan,

Miriel

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