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Comparison -- revised (G)
by Vilwarin.
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Thu Jun 30, 2005 3:08 pm
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I know, but it was a birthday wish, so... I did not like it that much either. *shrugs* It should be Rohan/Gondor and one people feels less civilized than another and then there is one person thinking about it. And then there comes Éomer and his connection with Lothíriel. I should have labeled it OOC perhaps.
Thank you. You know that you made me feel giulty? I had not liked the first version to begin with. I am now much more pleased with it. |
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Last edited by Vilwarin on Sun Jul 03, 2005 12:44 pm |
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Fit For a King (G)
by Vilwarin.
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Thu May 26, 2005 5:23 am
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I changed it. *hehe* I am at war with those horrible typos. 
~Vil |
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The Sun can Wait (NC-17)
by Vilwarin.
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Fri May 13, 2005 8:18 am
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Providing and heir...the perfect excuse for a big sleep in he, he.
Thank you for your comments, I enjoyed writing it. It provides a nice mental image. |
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A Dwarf's...something. (G)
by LuthienTinuviel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 5] Warnings [Sillyness]
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Thu May 05, 2005 1:17 pm
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| I do not know if it is just me, but I somehow do not understand what happened in the second half of the story. Perhaps it is only because I am not a native speaker. The first part was very funny, though. I am not sure if I could acomplish such a thingy at this hour of the night. Well done and amusing. |
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Loving (NC-17)
by Vilwarin.
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Tue Apr 05, 2005 8:01 am
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Ah, thank you very much for your praise, the smutty and the poetic part of my brain just had to collaborate and this was the outcome
Yes, I indeed meant 'sweet'. Too bad that English is not my native language. |
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Kingly Poetry (G)
by Vilwarin.
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Thu Nov 18, 2004 11:06 am
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Thank you. You are right about the end, and I changed it a bit, making him blush.
Ha, it is only Aragorn's fault, one just does not leave such a piece lying around, only waiting to be read by unauthorized persons! |
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Eowyn's sorrow (G)
by Vilwarin.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 7] Warnings [none]
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Sat Jun 05, 2004 9:08 am
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Hu, thank you.
Since english is not my native tongue it is not easy to write a gramatically perfect story.
Thus, critique is very appreciated.
I have gone over the story again and made some tiny changes. |
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The life and suffering of Mary-Sue (PG-13)
by Vilwarin.
Chapters [4]
Reviews [ 2] Warnings [None]
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Thu Jun 03, 2004 5:28 pm
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My first review!
I don't know yet. It depends on the creativity of my mind. *Sratches head*
Just need something to write about. Sugestions are VERY welcome. 
"Where is the plot bunny? Come to Vil!" *Races after it and tries to catch it.* |
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Last edited by Vilwarin on Sun Nov 06, 2005 9:17 am |
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Okay, NOW Panic! (PG-13)
by boz4PM.
Chapters [60]
Reviews [ 382] Warnings [none as yet]
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Wed Jun 02, 2004 7:03 am
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Wow, a cool beginning. I loved the Pelennor scenevery much.
Huy, beeing able to witness THE wedding.
I am curious about what Hal's sons will do with Penny. I adore the WHOLE "Dúnadan family" so much. The poor son's of his.
Please update soon. |
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Don't Panic! (PG-13)
by boz4PM.
Chapters [27]
Reviews [ 135] Warnings [STRONG language & angst]
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Wed Jun 02, 2004 6:56 am
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Oh my Gosh, this is one of the best stories I ever read.
I have never considered the every day problems in Middle-Earth before.
I just love how you have portrayed Halbarad *sigh*
It's really a pity Tolkien killed him 
Poor him, he had some terrible days with Penny  |
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