Reviews by Cuthalion

We Are None Too Different · Mon Sep 05, 2005 11:35 am

You truly have a very skilled hand writing about Legolas. Very fine!

First Watch · Mon Sep 05, 2005 11:31 am

Absolutely beautiful. Brava!

Retribution · Fri Jun 03, 2005 12:13 pm

I add my five cents to what Rous and Viv said; polish it a bit or chose a wise Beta to help you, and it will be brilliant. You kick me out of the tale far too fast at the end... it's like a break-off. And there is a repeated sentence at the beginning of the second paragraph; I guess you didn't want to say the same thing twice.

And it is good. Very good, really.

Coming Home · Wed May 04, 2005 2:45 am

I found this (nearly) per accident as it was the "rec of the day" on OSA. I'm deeply impressed. Canon-true, deep, wise and utterly beautiful, with remarkable portraits of the cousins (among them a sad, bereathtaking one of Frodo - BRAVA!!). One of the best Post-Quest-tales I've ever seen. Extremely well done!

I Never Hated You · Tue Apr 26, 2005 4:13 pm

Very fine! Makes me think of Lindelea's "The Rebel". If you never read this, you should by all means do it soon (you find it on "Stories of Arda").

Time Heals · Tue Apr 19, 2005 5:58 pm

Very beautiful and atmospheric. Well done!

Loving · Tue Apr 05, 2005 12:27 am

Excellent! (A tiny question: Shouldn't it be: "Sweet desire"?)

"Alive" and "Broken" · Sun Apr 03, 2005 3:15 pm

Brilliant! "Alive is simply wonderful, erotic and lyrical at the same time. "Broken" is priceless and made me howl with laughter at the last line - the only thing I would change is the "F..."-word - not because I dislike it but because no elven maiden would probably use it. How about "Stars!" ?

But still Brava!

Mating Season · Tue Mar 29, 2005 10:10 am

Sizzling and hot and sweet... and may the next summer come soon!

Hard Cider · Thu Mar 03, 2005 3:00 pm

Still wonderful! I didn't read this for quite a long time, but this was a fresh - and HOT - pleasure! *hugs you both*

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