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Avalanche (R)
by NeumeIndil.
Chapters [4]
Reviews [ 6] Warnings [Ouchies, meanness, heavy dialect.]
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Tue Jul 14, 2009 2:22 am
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HOLY HELL!
What an end! |
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| Author's replied on Wed Jul 29, 2009 10:34 pm |
So succinct, Binks, and yet you say *SO* much.  |
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Brotherhood. (R)
by curiouswombat.
Chapters [34]
Reviews [ 36] Warnings [Mention of rape in early chapter... and viscera!]
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Mon Jul 13, 2009 6:29 am
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Regarding "elf-struck" creatures, I belong to a sub-species of those: First-Age Sindar-Addict 
Jokes aside, this was a very interesting chapter -- to see Tindome mature, though of course she is still young, learn more about the her relatively new home, see differences and similarities between "here and now" and the one she lived in previously. I like the portrayal of her, have always liked since I started reading the series, and how her character develops.
Once again, well done! Thanks for the update. |
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| Author's replied on Mon Jul 13, 2009 12:09 pm |
| Thank you. I am enjoying showing how Dawn became Tindómë not just in name, but as a person - from a mid-teen Californian to a young elleth with a husband and child. This trip is turning out to be a really fun way for me to look at the different peoples of ME post-Ring War, too. |
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Return (G)
by Aearwen2.
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Mon Jul 13, 2009 5:16 am
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A very interesting idea and a believable, lovely story  Thank you. It was an enjoyable read. |
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| Author's replied on Tue Jul 14, 2009 10:31 am |
| Thank you for the review, and I'm glad you liked this. |
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Brotherhood. (R)
by curiouswombat.
Chapters [34]
Reviews [ 36] Warnings [Mention of rape in early chapter... and viscera!]
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 2:32 pm
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Ah, this was a fine lesson at diplomacy (and an elvish one, no less!) -- also it was very interesting to have a glimpse at what a stranger (and Eomer was one in this case, even though he had seen Dawn before) might think about Tindome. I almost forgot that she was not from ME, and with that in mind -- that she should still be cautious.
Very nicely done! Thanks |
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| Author's replied on Thu Jul 09, 2009 4:04 pm |
Thank you. I rather like Éomer - and could see him trying to walk a line between asking outright about her and trying to be diplomatic! I can see the twins, with many years of practice, being more natural at the diplomacy thing.
She is, still, an outsider, with the need to be careful about her actual origins whilst trying to fit in. Lessons are being learned all round - and will continue to be... |
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Brotherhood. (R)
by curiouswombat.
Chapters [34]
Reviews [ 36] Warnings [Mention of rape in early chapter... and viscera!]
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Sat Jun 27, 2009 10:25 am
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| I was wondering whether you'd go and write about their night together, and here it is! Dayum! First class smut Thanks! |
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| Author's replied on Sat Jun 27, 2009 1:18 pm |
Hee - my pleasure. And Tindómë, Rumil and Orophin's too....
Actually - I said when you reviewed the last chapter that there was a lot of Éomer 'in the next chapter' - I had lost track, as you will have realised - there wasn't a lot of him in this one at all. But he does feature a lot in chapter thirteen, honestly! |
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The Fire Within (PG-13)
by NeumeIndil.
Chapters [3]
Reviews [ 8] Warnings [Adult stuff.]
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Tue Jun 23, 2009 3:23 pm
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| I liked the talk between the fathers, I liked Istarnie's ally, and I liked all the family dynamics in this. And who was the spirit of fire here? Nicely done, and I'll keep a lookout for the next installment. Thanks for updating! |
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The Rescue of Celebrian (PG-13)
by NeumeIndil.
Chapters [15]
Reviews [ 26] Warnings [Angst and scary images/flashbacks.]
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Mon Jun 22, 2009 4:42 am
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| Poor child, he'd seen too much and desperately needed a moment of peace and a strong shoulder to support him. All of them needed a moment to take a deeper breath, I suppose. Good that Elladan was there Good stuff, as always. |
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Brotherhood. (R)
by curiouswombat.
Chapters [34]
Reviews [ 36] Warnings [Mention of rape in early chapter... and viscera!]
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Fri Jun 19, 2009 1:54 pm
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Totally digging your portrayal of Eomer He's a charmer, witty, noble, and all kinds of royal. Then, you did a great job of capturing the sorrowful moment of the celebration -- it was very moving (with the songs and the like) and not overdone. I like the humor, and the fondness with which Tindome perceived the Lady Wilflede.
Did I tell you I loved this story? Oh, and Orophin rocks! LOL!
Great stuff!
(Just want to apologize that my previous review was kind of curt. I was -- still am -- not very well, and I thought I'd let you know I read the chapter, but it couldn't write any longer, coherent comment.) |
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| Author's replied on Fri Jun 19, 2009 2:24 pm |
Oh I am so sorry that you've been unwell - I do hope that you are feeling better soon.
I have become rather fond of Orophin myself - as have a couple of my Live Journal friends - and there is quite a lot of him in the next chapter. |
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Brotherhood. (R)
by curiouswombat.
Chapters [34]
Reviews [ 36] Warnings [Mention of rape in early chapter... and viscera!]
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Tue Jun 16, 2009 12:40 pm
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| Very nice. Touching, funny from time to time, and sensual as well. Still loving this story. |
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| Author's replied on Tue Jun 16, 2009 1:34 pm |
| Thank you, I'm glad that the mix is about right! |
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Brotherhood. (R)
by curiouswombat.
Chapters [34]
Reviews [ 36] Warnings [Mention of rape in early chapter... and viscera!]
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Mon Jun 08, 2009 3:15 am
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What a heart-breaking chapter! There was something distrubing about the way in which Orophin mourned Haldir and recalled his memories. I thought he would fall apart, he was so vulnerable.
Well done! |
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| Author's replied on Mon Jun 08, 2009 6:57 am |
| Thank you - yes, Orophin has been under increasing pressure for a while - this was a cathartic point for him. There will be more about him in the next couple of chapters, too. |
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