Reviews by sculder

Elanor's Revenge · Mon Jan 22, 2007 1:05 am

hahaha.... Lana sounds like Jan Brady... "Elanor, Elanor, Elanor!" Was that your intent? Hopefully Elanor doesn't get hit in the face with a football...

Elanor's Revenge · Sun Dec 17, 2006 10:37 pm

All I have to say is "Thank goodness!" I have to confess, though, that I refused to read (more like reread) this story until it was pretty much finished because I'm very impatient with WIPs! But, obviously, two years later here I am! And this was certainly worth the wait! And thanks for the acknowledgement by the way!

Hm... just waiting for that happy sappy ending! This was a lovely story!

Elanor's Revenge · Sat Jul 17, 2004 3:45 am

Oh my gosh, this is a good fanfic! Grrr.. now I remember why I don't usually read WIP... I'm too darn impatient to find out what happens next! But still, this is really good!

I liked the analogies that you threw in there... the elanor flower, the archery lessons. Nice job! And Rumil cracks me up! I hope he finds something (or someone) to do... harhar.

To make this fic even more outstanding, I'd like to see some more heat between Haldir and Elanor. Nothing major, just some tension and/or fight to rile things up a little. Since they're a couple now, it would be good to see how they deal with a big fat fight! Now that they've made love, they don't have that unresolved sexual tension anymore. Ooh! Maybe it could do with their whole future! You wrote that he cared for her but wasn't sure if he was the one, since she was young, and he was her first lover, blah blah... you know what you said. Anyway, they could argue about that! She wants to be with him, he wants her to have more life experiences... I don't know. I'm just spewing ideas. You're probably writing something better!

And is Lurien going to go ballistic on them? Or maybe Ture? (Did I spell that right?) She could be frustrated with the whole waiting thing, and take matters into her own hands! I do suggest to wrap up the Lurien mini-plot pretty soon. Unless he's mentally unstable (which he could be), I don't really know where it's going.

I hope this doesn't sound harsh! I really really love this fic! They're funny and real and believable... after all, everything I said are just suggestions. Feel free to ignore completely. I'm the reader, not the writer.

Hurry hurry!

The Fifteenth of January · Tue Feb 03, 2004 1:28 am

Ooo... this piece makes me think! Good! I could sit here and anaylze this fanfic for a while.

Here's my take on it: Both brothers of Gondor going into battle at the same time, each man reflecting on the passion of battle, yes? I think I only figured that out because of the author's note. Without that introduction, I'm not sure I would have picked up on the parallel between the two brothers.

I liked that you seperated the two voices with simply stating, "Moria" and "Ithilien." So few clues, such hidden meaning!

Either that, I have W A Y too much time to sit and analyze things! Good job!

Gaming · Wed Dec 17, 2003 12:04 am

Nice story! Bummer that he dies...

I think my favorite parts of the story are the TITLES!! How incredibly fitting and analytical... it just makes sense! I love the play on words: Gaming, Challenge, Check, Mate... and of course "Mate" is the chapter when, well... you know...

So clever! Either that, or I am way too analytical!

English grads unite!

Unrepentant, Unforgiven · Fri Oct 31, 2003 3:41 am

Holy cow! That was the best revenge story I've ever read! Great job!

I especially liked the range of emotions that Legolas had: humor, hatred, guilt, sadness, sickness (although I don't think feeling ill is really an emotion). I also never would have expected all that out of Eowyn. I loved how Eowyn could not admit she was wrong; what a consistent character! You were actually able to give us some pyschological reasons why Eowyn acted as she did. Still disliked her, but at least she wasn't some raving, pyschotic lunatic.

Faramir, however, seemed like a lovesick puppy and very forgiving. I would have liked to see the exchange that he had with Eowyn after "the discovery." I'm all about the range of emotions in characters!

But great job! You should be a paid writer!

Lord of the Glittering Harem · Thu Oct 30, 2003 2:20 am

Wow! You're pretty talented to take up a challenge like that. Very funny, and I'm glad that dwarf women don't have beards. Thanks for clearing that up! Very Happy smiley face

Comfortably Numb · Thu Oct 30, 2003 2:13 am

Nice work, good read. But do elves really say "sure as hell"?

Eternally · Wed Aug 20, 2003 2:25 am

This is one of the best pieces of fanfic I've ever read... and I've read quite a bit! Great job, keep up the good work!

PS - Are you a paid writer? You should be! Very Happy smiley face

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