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Reviews by NeumeIndil

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Home on the Serenity (PG-13)
by FatiferousPoet.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [7]
Warnings [Jayne crudeness]
Wed Jan 10, 2007 2:57 am

LMAO. I could totally see this on a gag reel or outtake. You nailed him! (In print, at least. Wink smiley face ) Shiny.
 
 
Thanks from the Inside (PG)
by Viv.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [6]
Wed Jan 10, 2007 2:51 am

Wow. I always have trouble as a writer getting into the minds of unconventional characters. It would flat out terrify me to try to write River, and you did it so well here. Shiny indeed!
 
 
Watch how I soar... (PG)
by Rhapsody.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Wed Jan 10, 2007 2:48 am

Zoe's line always kills me, but the leaf image you've used so well is really what resonates with me now that I've seen the film and the full series. It took me straight back to Wash over the controls muttering to himself. Very well done, Rhaps. :hugs:
 
 
Via Media (G)
by Thevina.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [11]
Fri Dec 08, 2006 6:16 am

I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. Aside from the fact I'm glad to see someone writing dwarves, a task I've been sidetracked from, I like the thought you've put into the culture of it. He sounds very like an old military campaigner with a new recruit deciding how far to trust the new guy and reliving memories of happier times. Very nicely done. Thanks for writing it.
 
 
Hot and Heavy (PG-13)
by TheOboistinLorien.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Warnings [Implied raunchiness?]
Fri Dec 08, 2006 5:46 am

If it wasn't posted here, I'd have read this with a very dirty thought in mind. As it is, I'm laughing anyway. Nicely done.
 
 
Business and Pleasure (R)
by vladazhael.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [10]
Warnings [Adult situations]
Fri Dec 08, 2006 5:33 am

Hmm. If she ever needs somebody to pinch-hit for her, keep me in mind? Wink smiley face You write him like some kind of demi-god in the bedroom. Awesome.
 
 
The Arachnid's Appeal (G)
by trekqueen.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Warnings [goofy-ness]
Fri Dec 08, 2006 5:11 am

She's so lady-like! Rather like a Charlotte (from Charlotte's Web) from the dark side. I laughed out loud at the request for Easterlings and such, but the final requests just made the story for me. You gave her a real personality (and a streak of vanity at that!) that I would find difficult to do. Very nicely done!
 
 
A Letter of Complaint (G)
by FatiferousPoet.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Fri Dec 08, 2006 5:02 am

Very nice! I'd never thought of the Ring itself (or herself, for some reason this struck me rather like a "Dear John!" sort of thing) as a PoV character. This was hilarious.
 
 
Thranduil's Bargains (NC-17)
by Ingole.

Chapters [16]
Reviews [44]
Warnings [Explicit sex; animal death]
Tue Sep 05, 2006 4:19 am

Wow. You know, it takes a lot of great writing to make me weep for a warg. How you did it I'm sure I'll never know. I love your Thranduil and your OFCs are consistently remarkable. I love Dolen- I believe I always will. She's such a darling and a fully rounded character with or without the power of speech. The innuendo you drop in at the least expected moment adds another level to an already great and very creative story, and as a "lavandur" myself, the pets are the icing on the cake. A baby warg? In the Caves? Why did I wait this long to read this? Brava! Excellent story telling.
 
 
The Pants Game (G)
by Requiem.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [10]
Mon Aug 28, 2006 9:55 pm

Snort! Great, now I'm playing the pants game in my head too. That's almost worse than adding "in bed" at the end of a fortune cookie message. The humor was successfully found, and I needed the laugh. Very cute. Do you have any more in this vein?