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Taking Ship (G)
by Radbooks.
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Mon Apr 17, 2006 1:37 am
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| I really like your portrayal of Elrond in this piece. The weariness and uncertainty seem very in tune with what he would feel at that point in his life. Dialogue seemed very natural and the narrative voice was equally appropriate, sympathetic and knowledgeable at the same time. I very much enjoyed it and thank you for it. |
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Galenas (G)
by Vilwarin.
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Mon Apr 17, 2006 12:59 am
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This piece brought me a smile and reminds me very much of a similar lesson I had few years ago. I'd be interested to see the moment after this when, of course, he inhales anyway.  Thank you for this fic. |
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Thirsty (PG-13)
by AngmarsElfhild.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 7] Warnings [vampires]
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Mon Apr 17, 2006 12:48 am
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| Oooh. Weird. Creepy. Unexpected. I like it. |
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Pretty But Not Too Sweet (G)
by Julie.
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Fri Apr 14, 2006 11:23 pm
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| A very sweet short piece. I like Haldir as the "wise older brother" having female troubles of his own. It adds a nice touch of humanity to the situation. Is this a companion piece to another fic? If so, you might want to advertise in the Shameless Self Promotion thread in the forums. |
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The Last Thing He Said (G)
by NeumeIndil.
Chapters [4]
Reviews [ 15] Warnings [Possible tear jerker]
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Thu Apr 13, 2006 11:27 pm
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Thank you all. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Don't know where it came from, but I'm sure more will show up in the future.
Thanks again,
Neume |
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Gríma Goldentongue (G)
by Lackwit.
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Sat Mar 25, 2006 4:36 pm
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| This is an excellent short story, very well built and richly detailed. The characters are all portrayed very well in a tight space- Eowyn's passion, Eomer's temper, Theoden's wisdom- with just a few words doing so much. A great choice for story of the day. Thank you for it. |
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Taters and Thyme (PG-13)
by Cuthalion.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 3] Warnings [None]
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Sat Mar 25, 2006 9:00 am
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| One day I must figure out why your hobbit fics always move me to tears. Granted I am rather sentimental, but this is such a sweet look at Sam, and as Rohanion said, so very *Sam* of him. In this piece he reminds me very much of my own father. Excellent, and a wonderfully complete short story too. Thank you for it. |
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In the Darkness of my Dreaming (R)
by Cuthalion.
Chapters [4]
Reviews [ 6] Warnings [dark, angsty themes; character death]
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Sun Mar 19, 2006 6:23 am
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| My keyboard is speckled with tears. I thoroughly enjoyed your Lily/Frodo tales and what a fitting end this has turned out to be. Would that I had half of Lily's strength and courage. Thank you so very much for the hard work that went into these stories and for the enjoyment they've offered. |
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Away (G)
by Mitasova.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 5] Warnings [none]
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Thu Mar 16, 2006 4:56 am
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| I think we all have days like this and you've done an excellent job of capturing that hemmed in feeling in a small amount of space. Nicely done. |
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A Liminal Patience (G)
by Thevina.
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Mon Mar 13, 2006 12:00 am
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| I always have such a hard time thinking of Grima as a man. I think his betrayal makes him seem very human, but here you've done an excellent job of reminding us of the other traits- his jealousy, his fear of Theodred and Eomer, the longing that he can only indulge in from a distance- that make him more than just a villan. The line about wishing to be a drop of her sweat sticks with me as a great image and sentiment. Very nicely done. |
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