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Master of Shadows (R)
by SpaceWeavil.
Chapters [7]
Reviews [ 20] Warnings [sexual situations; violence; mil]
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Wed Feb 22, 2006 3:38 pm
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These are lovely, Space. You are really a master of description, and you stay wonderfully consistent to the tone and theme of description in each piece. I noticed especially in the first one with the consistency in likening everything to stone both in sight and sound. I have discovered with each of your stories there is a certain phrase or turn of words that hooks me like a largemouth bass. I was only going to read one chapter because the dust rhino's have threatened to take over my house....RIGHT! I'm heading back for my second reading! I'm still such a newbie to ME I don't know jack about the history of the Witch King but you really made a multidimensional character out of him. Anything else I could say Ghetto already did!
SpaceWeavil is da BOMB! 
Roh |
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In the Bleak Midwinter (PG)
by SpaceWeavil.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [character death]
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Mon Dec 19, 2005 12:55 am
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This is a really lovely piece. From the very first phrase it pulls you in and won't let you go. I am pretty much a rookie when it comes to anything much deeper than movie verse, but with this story it doesn't matter. The images are so clear and the details so haunting, it hits you in the gut, i.e. the childs body frozen in the snow. There aren't many stories that keep me coming back to re read, but this is definately one. Rhapsody and RobinKa pretty much said everything else I could say, I'll leave you with this:   
(Geez, those emoticons are so freakin fun for the simple minded!)
Roh
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Homecoming (PG)
by NancyBrooke.
Chapters [2]
Reviews [ 3] Warnings [Not AU as such]
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Mon Dec 12, 2005 9:43 am
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| Very nice. Gave me goosebumps. And with no sarcasm intended, thank you for your proper use of commas. |
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Recollections (G)
by SilverMoonLady.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 14]
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Sat Dec 10, 2005 10:06 pm
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| This is lovely. Very moving and bittersweet. I don't often tear up when reading. Thank goodness it was the story of the day today or else I'd have missed this jewel, which is going on my recomended list. |
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The Elf and Future King (NC-17)
by Alassante.
Chapters [16]
Reviews [ 44] Warnings [Explicit sex]
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Sat Dec 10, 2005 8:03 pm
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Great chapter! (14) The sex just gets steamier and steamier!  Quick! Write more! I am dying to see how you get these two right with the world. |
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Aftermath (NC-17)
by SpaceWeavil.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 15] Warnings [Sexual content]
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Wed Dec 07, 2005 8:20 pm
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I am normally not a fan of the "sex with a stranger" theme and I never really got what made Haldir so hot.
Then I read this story.
It is very rare to find a piece that is both spare and lush at the same time. Spare in that every single word works, not a phrase is superfluous or wasted; but lush in the detail and the intimacy created. Good Writing lets you see what is going on, Great Writing makes you feel what is going on. I had thought to pick out a phrase or two to illustrate that, but it is nearly impossible to pick out just one, because the whole piece is so tight and well constructed.
This is Great Writing.
I read this story before RL took me out of Middle Earth for a while, but it was one crossed my mind on more than one occasion because it is so haunting. It may take me a while but I intend to read everything you have written. Thanks for a great story.
Roh
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A New-Old Maid (PG)
by Shanalir.
Chapters [10]
Reviews [ 11] Warnings [Mentions of body parts/personal matters]
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Sat Jul 16, 2005 1:38 pm
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| Very cute. I can't wait to see where you go with it next. I like the "pink" touch. |
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My Eyes! My Eyes! (R)
by Alassante.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 25]
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Wed Jul 13, 2005 9:43 pm
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Snicker...that was funny! Give yourself a  |
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The Elf and Future King (NC-17)
by Alassante.
Chapters [16]
Reviews [ 44] Warnings [Explicit sex]
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Wed Jul 13, 2005 9:38 pm
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I admit I wasn't sure I would like this story at first...  But I think it only took me two paragraphs to get hooked. You are doing a great job of portraying the torment Amrun and Eomer feel, to be desperately in love but separated by culture. To want each other so badly, but be afraid to trust...Don't stop now, put me out of my misery!  |
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Walls With Ears (PG)
by Shanalir.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [Implied Adult Situation]
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Sat Jul 09, 2005 8:30 pm
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Yes! Much better! It has the flow that was missing before. I actually snickered out loud when I read it. And I agree with what Nancy said about the "lady", it gave a lot more depth without too many words. Good job!
So are you planning to do more drabbles with this one? You could have a lot of fun with Eowyn blackmailing Eomer... |
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