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I Walked a Road of Stars (R)
by TheOboistinLorien.
Chapters [8]
Reviews [ 10] Warnings [Violence, light sex]
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Tue Nov 29, 2005 10:08 pm
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//... Particularly, the tattoo sequence and the discussion of the fear of death--and a life devoid of love. ...//
Thank heavens there was mention of revision! Good grief, I almost missed this. The first version was very, very good I thought, but now having read this one, I find this one is tighter, deeper - just wonderful. |
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Counting the days- Inspiration (PG-13)
by LadyBluejay.
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Mon Nov 28, 2005 1:51 pm
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| Nice. I like seeing into his head - all those thoughts churning around - and then watching him take a more careful approach. LOL |
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The Letter (G)
by Rous.
Chapters [3]
Reviews [ 16] Warnings [Hanky may be needed.]
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Sat Nov 26, 2005 6:19 pm
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Pshaw! From the Sil? Well that's what I get for reading your a/n AFTER I post. lol
And Ghettoelleth knows I'm trying mightily to get through that one.......  |
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The Letter (G)
by Rous.
Chapters [3]
Reviews [ 16] Warnings [Hanky may be needed.]
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Sat Nov 26, 2005 6:16 pm
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Elrond, right? To Galadriel? About Celebrian? Or am I missing something? (Seeing as my lack of Canon knowlege is bound to get me trouble at some point.)
I don't see this as morbid really - just sad. Is there a difference? To me, yes. But then I like just about anything when it's handled well.
Interesting subject and well done interlude/gap-filler/etc. I hear Elrond's(?) voice when I read it. |
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I Walked a Road of Stars (R)
by TheOboistinLorien.
Chapters [8]
Reviews [ 10] Warnings [Violence, light sex]
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Fri Nov 18, 2005 1:40 pm
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I read this before on another site and really enjoyed it. Your version of Haldir's death was such a surprise and very moving.
Looking forward to move of your work.. |
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It flew swiftly (G)
by BlookKING.
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Tue Nov 15, 2005 1:46 pm
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| All things archery - there's a certain mystique to them I think. Kinda the 'oneness' that exists between the archer and his arrow. You captured that in your choice of words and presentation. Cool. |
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Not a Boy (G)
by Vilwarin.
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Mon Nov 14, 2005 1:30 pm
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Nicely done.
What are older siblings for anyway? lol |
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Suspicions (PG)
by lucidity.
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Sat Nov 05, 2005 5:23 pm
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Nicely done and very interesting. Good grasp of LOTR background for being new to the fandom. 
Do you have other vignettes for us to read? |
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A Rose (PG-13)
by raelynn48601.
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Wed Nov 02, 2005 7:18 pm
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I meant to comment earlier - time just got away from me....
You have some good ideas here and should continue with your story.
I never stopped to think that Rivendell could/would be a place of refuge for the broken-hearted - so to speak. It was probably mentioned somewhere in canon but not elaborated on much. I also like the barkeep character (sorry, I don't have his name in front of me). You've fleshed him out a bit.
Keep writing - you can do more with this. |
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First Night (NC-17)
by NeumeIndil.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 11] Warnings [Horse Lord Nookie]
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Tue Nov 01, 2005 2:26 pm
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"Morwen hoped he knew better than to ask a whore who her father was. Apparently he did."
This is just one of many lines that hit me.
What a well-crafted piece you have here. Nothing wasted, nothing lacking. I found myself enjoying every line - unhurridly, in the moment. Nice nice nice nice nice.
Now please point me to your Gamling/Morwen novel. |
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