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Guess who's comin' for dinner (PG-13)
by inglor.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [16]
Warnings [slightly naughty reference]
Wed Jun 29, 2005 9:35 am
Very funny, Inglor! But seriously - this drabble seemed effortless: no crammed words. Finrod saying 'Howdy' though ... priceless.
 
 
Dialling the Pegasus Galaxy (G)
by Rhapsody.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [15]
Wed Jun 29, 2005 9:32 am
I had doubts about this challenge but every response has been witty and interesting! Good job.
 
 
Summer Reruns (Drabble) (G)
by Rous.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [13]
Warnings [Totally unbelievable]
Wed Jun 29, 2005 9:30 am
Very cool ... Highlander is one of the best completely hokey films ever. You drew an interesting comparison.
 
 
In Dreams (G)
by Vilwarin.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Mon Jun 27, 2005 2:49 pm
Very nice and evocative; it's something I hadn't really thought about before - Aragorn missing his father.
 
 
The World of Men (G)
by Vilwarin.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Fri Jun 24, 2005 4:37 pm
Excellent, Vilwarin. I was thrown by the narrator's being a ranger and so physically aware of and repulsed by mannish things; a fittingly disrupting reaction to his own confusion. Good job making your readers and character feel the same.
 
 
Maybe We Should Stay In Minas Tirith (PG)
by Saoirse.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [7]
Wed Jun 22, 2005 8:15 pm
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*Very* clever; I loved the stages of Merry's persistence, and Pippin's final, simple, reaction. You, also, did a great job of seeing things from their perspective!
 
 
Arwen's Gift (G)
by Vilwarin.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Wed Jun 22, 2005 7:32 am
Sometimes the simple things - remembered gifts, clear writing - are the most effective.
 
 
Steps (NC-17)
by Silvia.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Tue Jun 21, 2005 12:53 pm
This is very interesting work, Silvia, but it desperately needs an English-speaking beta. Still, some extraordinary elements come through - the idea of personal and political boundries, e.g., and passion so thick it's palpable. I think this could be first rate, but it needs a beta first.
 

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End of a Quest (PG)
by trekqueen.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Fri Jun 17, 2005 3:52 pm
This is a very good idea, TQ, with a lovely poignant tone.
 
 
The Last Thing He Said (G)
by NeumeIndil.
Chapters [4]
Reviews [15]
Warnings [Possible tear jerker]
Fri Jun 17, 2005 3:48 pm
Nice idea, NeumeIndil, and sweetly written. It would have been so easy to overplay this but you stuck to understatement. The change in perspective at the end threw me a little, but I love the idea of the big guy having a pet that would love him so.
 
 
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