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The Hands of the Steward (G)
by alexissteele.
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Thu Oct 14, 2004 2:21 pm
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| This story has many wonderful details and is well and fully conceived. I particularly loved that Gimli puts his trust in "rock and stone" while Faramir sees only the people who dwell there; also very nice to have Boromir brought up to Pippin by Aragorn. |
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Alone (G)
by Cadiliniel.
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Fri Sep 10, 2004 12:15 pm
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| I really loved your look into Sam's heart, here; this fic has several lovely moments. I missed Sam's unique voice, though; it is so distinctive and absent here, I think. |
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Repentance (G)
by saborice.
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Sat Sep 04, 2004 2:45 pm
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A nice idea, Saborice; the last goodbye of Faramir and Boromir has been done many times but I think you got a good new perspective on it, Boromir contemplating his mortality and loss of innocense.
Two tidbits niggled at me as I read it; you could think about tweaking them a bit, if you wanted,
- why are innocense and purity and inconsistent combination?
- 'there for me' is a really modern expression; perhaps you could find one a tad more appopropriate? |
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Unbridled Glory (PG-13)
by Forest.
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Wed Aug 11, 2004 3:57 pm
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| Good start, Forest. Looking forward to more. |
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You in Your Small Corner (G)
by SpaceWeavil.
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Sun Aug 08, 2004 9:25 am
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| Excellent! You did a great job limiting your expression at times to just what a child would think and not know. And a few moments really touched me - when Boromir says he'll take care of his father, for example. You planted the seeds here for so much of the brother's characters. Really well done. |
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Remember When It Rained (G)
by Vendie.
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Tue Aug 03, 2004 9:09 am
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| Very nice. There were a few typo-y moments, but all forgotten with the word "silly;" that was a great little moment. |
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La Belle Dame Sans Merci (R)
by sindohte.
Chapters [7]
Reviews [ 13] Warnings [Some Gore]
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Wed Jul 21, 2004 3:38 pm
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Excellent, fabulous, wonderful, insightful! I love that you embodied the temptation we thought we were all familiar with as a woman, and that woman was the same and yet different to everyone who desired her.
Your language is lovely without being inflated, fluid and smooth and seems effortlessly connected. I particularly love the line in chapt. 2 about her feeling like a sword-hilt; a perfect moment. That paragraph could almost stand by itself as a drabble.
(I'm being somewhat vague, purposefully; anyone who reads this story should have the pleasure of discovering it word by word and not be tipped off in advance). |
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The Lay of Arwen Undomiel (PG-13)
by LuthienTinuviel.
Chapters [6]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [Stupidity by the author.]
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Sun Jul 18, 2004 2:10 pm
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| Very clever! A great idea. |
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Reasoning (G)
by Cadiliniel.
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Sat Jul 10, 2004 11:48 am
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| A very well written and interesting portrait - only I couldn't say of who, sorry! |
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The Heirs (G)
by katt.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 12]
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Sat Jul 10, 2004 11:41 am
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Charming! Very funny with some lovely turns of phrase and fun characterizations.
Needs a once over for typos, though (particularly in the Pimpernel paragraph) |
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