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When Destinies Meet, part 2: Hidden Liaisons (R)
by Malinwen.
Chapters [7]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [violence, some adult situations]
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Fri Oct 01, 2010 10:52 am
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| While most guns in Star Wars are blasters, I read somewhere that there were some "slug rifles" that used bullets. All is well, carry on. |
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| Author's replied on Fri Oct 01, 2010 12:22 pm |
| Whoops, seems I slipped on that one - but thankfully, there are people like you who put the record straight! I hope I'll be able to update this sooner. Thanks for sticking around! |
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Just a Short Smoke (G)
by KittOtter.
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Tue Jul 20, 2010 7:49 pm
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| lol. just lol. |
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| Author's replied on Wed Jul 21, 2010 1:49 pm |
| Danke!! ^_^ |
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Strange Land (PG-13)
by Elfique.
Chapters [2]
Reviews [ 3] Warnings [AU : moderate violence/gore - I'd rate a 15.]
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Sun May 23, 2010 12:07 pm
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i really liked this...though admittedly, i thought maglor was sauron for a while. the fact that he wasn't made him more awesome. a lot more awesome, as i wasn't expecting maglor. very well done.  |
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| Author's replied on Mon May 24, 2010 7:50 am |
Hey,
Thanks for your review of 'Strange Land'. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though I am curious about why you thought it was Sauron - at least that proves I got the mystery factor right I guess! |
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When Destinies Meet, part 2: Hidden Liaisons (R)
by Malinwen.
Chapters [7]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [violence, some adult situations]
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Mon Apr 19, 2010 8:34 am
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question. does Summer really need to say "My lightsaber is purple" down towards the end? it came off a lot like "I like cheese and potatoes" in context. interesting information, but unnecessary.
that being said, the color of a jedi's lightsaber doesn't exactly matter. the reason they are almost never red is because the red color of the sith lightsabers is produced by a synthetic crystal, unlike the natural crystals found in a certain cave on the planet of Illum which the jedi use. |
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| Author's replied on Mon Apr 19, 2010 8:54 am |
| I probably should have added a little more context to that, now that I look at it. It was perfectly clear to me but I guess, since I'm the author of this story, it should be lol. I derived the whole purple lightsaber context from both watching the movies and reading up on it, and never finding many Jedi who wielded violet lightsabers. Mace Windu is the only one from the Old Republic who's listed, because the next ones are Anakin and Jaina Solo, from the new generation. Mace was a skilled diplomat and as High Jedi Master a respected member of society and the Temple, and skilled in combat as well. I guess I tried conveying that through the cheesy line 'My lightsaber is purple', going for purple = Mace Windu = da bomb *g*. But thanks for pointing this out, I'll definitely work on it in the future! |
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Lucifer (PG-13)
by yuriko.
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Sun Aug 30, 2009 12:29 pm
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| if i may make a small suggestion...when someone is thinking to him/herself, perhaps if you set that off somehow? perhaps with italics or single quotes? |
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Gamemaster (PG-13)
by yuriko.
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Sun Aug 30, 2009 12:03 pm
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while the in-text (by which i mean, the parts that weren't just long lists of materials, technologies, and whatnot) were very enjoyable and engrossing, the aforementioned long lists were rather distracting. i personally would remove them, as they do not seem to add anything to the story.
however, this is your story, and i can only advise.
that being said, which version of Civilization were you basing the ministers, their sayings, and...really, the entire game, off of? i'm a bit of a fan myself.  |
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When Destinies Meet, part 2: Hidden Liaisons (R)
by Malinwen.
Chapters [7]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [violence, some adult situations]
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Mon Feb 02, 2009 9:17 pm
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Reaction upon finding the story: *fangirl squee* Yay! It's finally here/I can't wait!
Reaction upon reading the first chapter: OMG WTF just happened/when is the next chapter???? |
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| Author's replied on Tue Feb 03, 2009 3:31 pm |
| Am glad you're happy about this! It took me forever, but while I'm working on my muse for Golden Queen, I thought I'd write this one up. I think this chapter explains what's been going on, but more will come! Be sure to hold on to your chair, it'll be a bumpy ride! |
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The History of a Famous Friend (PG)
by rockdudette1066.
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Mon Mar 10, 2008 8:45 pm
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Very interesting idea!  I certaintly never would have thought of it.
One question though: Is this before or after the War of the Ring? Because Aragorn wasn't a King until after, and the Council of Elrond (or at least the most famous one) was before/during.
And who knows? Gandalf might really wear glasses....and Sauron might really be blind.
So then, did Harry get contacts, or does he just have perfect vision in ME? |
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Nightmare (NC-17)
by Elhia.
Chapters [5]
Reviews [ 10]
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Mon Feb 04, 2008 4:40 pm
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This is probably just me being picky....but technically, Legolas and Alice should not understand each other. Aran Tolkien specifically said in the Appendices (and in other places) that Westron was not English.
Other than that, it's really good so far! |
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At the Mercy of a Burning Coal (PG-13)
by Dawnblossom.
Chapters [42]
Reviews [ 27] Warnings [Violence/language/graphic scenes/romance]
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Mon Nov 26, 2007 7:22 pm
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| Very interesting. |
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