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Frustrated twins,Acorn throwing Elflings & Lecturing Glorfindels (G)
by SoYun.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [4]
Fri Sep 08, 2006 9:53 am
This was very cute! A great little plot bunny! i would suggest you find yourself a beta reader though to help you. There were several errors, the ones sticking out the most being

dishrivelled - I think you meant dishevelled

And it's Imladris...not Imraldis...that was misspelled every time...

but you've got a great story here anyway...
NiRi
 
 
Ullume, Ten Meles (Forever, For Love) (NC-17)
by TariImp.
Chapters [8]
Reviews [6]
Thu Sep 07, 2006 8:14 pm
This is a great story! But you need to finish it!!! come on...don't leave us hanging!!!
NiRi
 
 
West Wind Over Edoras (NC-17)
by Rozzan.
Chapters [16]
Reviews [26]
Thu Sep 07, 2006 8:12 pm
Beautiful story. Very well written.
NiRi
 
 
HUNTRESS AND HER PREY (NC-17)
by jenni.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [2]
Warnings [Some non-con sexual activity.]
Thu Sep 07, 2006 8:05 pm
Well written...though I don't like elves being whores...very uncanonical. But great plot and playfulness...
NiRi
 
 
A Heart Divided (NC-17)
by Seriiyah.
Chapters [3]
Reviews [3]
Warnings [None this chapter]
Thu Sep 07, 2006 7:19 pm
this is interesting...please continue it! I want to see how this all works out! You can't leave it there!!!
NiRi (nieriel raina)
 
 
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